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for Sinners: Arc 2

by Stormborn Apostle

person General Review
schedule April 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I don't know what to say at this latest chapy. Horrible cliff hanger. Absolutly cruel of yu for someone as impatient of mine. Will keep checking. Hope to see what Flannary and Blaze will make of this.
person zero
schedule April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
greate work i been waiting for a wile for the update hope that you have more soon keep up the good work
schedule April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Anon---Maybe if Sinners was PWP, lol. Unfortunately for some, however, it's not.

Gus Schade---Flannery/Blaziken might happen in the main story, but only between them (not with Slash and Psymakio) and not until the Fallarbor crisis is over. They're smarter than that, lol.

AHAHA BEST CONCRIT EVER: Perhaps you should submit this chapter a few weeks ago. Such advice seems meant for me and my never-make-it deadlines.

Max---Y'all are greedy horndogs, lol

zero---Next chapter shouldn't take nearly as long, since it's mostly done and pretty much just needs editing. Might get cut in half if it ends up going long, though.
schedule April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another fun chapter to read. I kept laughing at the concept of the two trainers/pokemon teaming up. It would be like a staring contest, but by staring, I mean "who can catch the other trainer fucking their Pokemon first".

And then I read the last paragraph, and laughed even harder.
schedule April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Jasmin Kaiba---The original plan for Flannery was minimal time, but now I'm starting to fall in love with her. Her role in the story will be larger than I intended.

dave---Blaziken was always my favorite starter third generation, though it was always hard for me to decide if I should focus on physical attacks, special attacks, or just balance him out.

RichardtheDragon---Sometimes the best thing a friend can do is kick your ass, lol.

Imasuky Lomae---I should make a oneshot featuring my weird little vision...Slash picks up a stone and skips it across a lake. Graveler, a slightly larger stone, punches him in the fucking face to avenge his tiny comrade. XD

And yes, Blaziken is very protective. Like Slash would be if he had to watch people hitting on Psymakio all the time (and had fire powers that he had to hold back). No sexiness will happen between these four in the main story.

Vyers---Not so much a zombie, though corrupted Pokemon will continually resurrect until their bodies are physically unable to move.

Nona---I loves me a Crawdaunt. As for what's in store with him...well, he'll be fighting a Pokemon that's completely equal to him in terms of type advantages. That should make it obvious. :-D

Psyence---His power level...it's...1006.

Yeah. Kick his ass, Nappa.

SF---Glad you like it.

Knight---As for when Slash will snap...well, I'll say that it's inevitable. As for the next scene of lemony goodness...unfortunately, not for a while. Not until the Fallarbor crisis is over, at the least.

Ragdoll---Glad you liked it.

Psyence---As you'll see in the next chapter, Psymakio will have to limit her power to avoid drawing corrupted Pokemon at night. Even when she's at full strength, she'd have to be looking for it, and there's little reason for her to do so. As for Flannery/Blaziken action...it's possible, although not anytime soon. Unlike a certain horny trainer and his horny Gardevoir, those two have better sense than the fuck under a volcano, lol.

zero---You'll find out pretty soon. :3

Imasuky Lomae---Two years of Sinners. Blows my mind. Longest single writing project I've ever had.

Psyence---My favorite story hasn't been updated in a year. PRAY THAT I NEVER TAKE A PAGE FROM THAT.

J. Winter---I love any list that includes "anal" like it was something to pick up at the grocery store. XD

Next chapter will be uploaded in approximately one minute.
person Bishonen
schedule April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great new chapter i can't help but wondre who swa them at the end.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
schedule April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Vyers---The consequence of my late-night updates, heh.

Imasuky Lomae---Well, there ain't that many possibilities, lol. And none of them are very good.
person Anon
schedule April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, it could have been Blaziken and Flannery who then decide to have a hawt foursome but... Somehow I doubt it.
person yawg07
schedule April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHH! lol I was hoping for Flannery/Blaziken action SO BADLY.
Ah well :D I'm sure it will come along, work us up a one-shot please! :3

I liked the chapter, story is moving along, I just wish it was a few weeks ago. *teases*
Keep up the good work!
person Max
schedule April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sweeeeet. Always good to see moar.
Oh, but it's better to see moar of moar.

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