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April 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter count: 4
Not a bad start to the second arc. Anal, getting to learn more about Kiako, the appearance of Rayquaza, an epic gym battle, and some new curiosities arriving, to boot! Six chapters to go, as of current... can't wait to see what happens. :D
Not a bad start to the second arc. Anal, getting to learn more about Kiako, the appearance of Rayquaza, an epic gym battle, and some new curiosities arriving, to boot! Six chapters to go, as of current... can't wait to see what happens. :D
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March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say Happy Birthday Psymaiko since it's March 29th and that I still think this is the best story on the site.
With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
gret work i read the series and you got me jook on it can't wait to see what happends next
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March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Woot its been awhile since I last read any of your updates and you have two! When will slash be able to bust out all that dark energy within him hte seeds of anger and doubt cloud his mind and can come up again easily if the slighest harm or well disconnection from Psymakio happens. I would definetlly see what would happen if he went nutz. Crawdaunt fuck ye! I like the intro with Flannery and her Blaziken that dude is one bad ass mother fucker. Overall good job dude but...when shall there be more smut!?
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March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent, as always.
Turns out I hadn't read the previous chapter, either, so I got to have a really decent length's read (:
Turns out I hadn't read the previous chapter, either, so I got to have a really decent length's read (:
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February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sweet!!! You just get better and better in each chapter, Slash! Keep them rolling!
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February 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I must say that the latest chapter is perhaps the best yet. I really think that things are going to get even more exciting from here, and you certainly are able to deliver on that front. Interesting to see crawdaunt's evolution and what all it entailed, and obviously I'm curious as to what exactly Flannery is doing out here, and what she has to say to Slash. Great work, and I can't wait for the next update; keep 'em coming!
--Nona
--Nona
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February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Imasuky Lomae--As Slash points out in the next chapter, mocking a religion is legal, at least technically. Threatening to kill someone is not. So yes, he's lucky Psymakio stopped him in time.
And hopefully, with my shorter and more frequent updates, my inbox won't be flooded with so many threats and pleading "update plz" messages, heh.
RichardtheDragon---And rage is a lot worse when it's amplified by taking a psychic mate, enhanced by receiving a foreign source of power, and destabilized by a chaotic veil of unholy energy. :'(
Satoku---The angst tag is there for a reason, though this is only the tip of the iceberg. The Fallarbor incident will, one day, seem like a relatively minor crisis to Slash and Psymakio.
The next chapter picks up the pace, as they travel through the ashlands and confront an incredibly powerful opponent. Plus a certain sexy redhead is introduced, though she won't get her proper limelight until the chapter AFTER this recent update. I planned to continue Twisted until they reached Fallarbor, but I was already a little late with this chapter, and stopped at 9000 words.
And heh, if I can't do a mating season in the main Sinners story, it'd make good oneshot material. That reminds me...after chapter 27 is out, I'll finally be able to write my long-planned Flannery-tastic oneshot, since she'll have a real personality and all (she makes a bad first impression on Slash in 26, despite coming to his aid, lol). Yay...
Psyence--Two updates in a little more than a week? OH HO HO. I like this new update style.
Vyers---That's exactly what Slash is. He doesn't really know what's happening to him; all he knows is that it's fucking with his mind and his (barely understood) powers, and it's starting to put himself and his pack in danger. Until the pack meets with the Second Storyteller (who isn't THAT far off anymore), they'll be mostly in the dark.
As for foreshadowing...seeing as the entity that put the hourglass in Slash's head was insanely powerful, it would take another insanely powerful entity to move it. Plus you'd have to find someone to put it IN, and I doubt many people would want to volunteer for that, lol.
Thecakenator---That's fucked me up, too. It appears to have stopped the review spam problem though, at least in the sections of AFF that I frequent. I'm training myself to copy my reviews before submitting them.
And yes, I like the update style, too. Much less stressful for me.
Kitsune_Writer---Chapter 26 is out now, and 27 is on the way. Hooray!
And hopefully, with my shorter and more frequent updates, my inbox won't be flooded with so many threats and pleading "update plz" messages, heh.
RichardtheDragon---And rage is a lot worse when it's amplified by taking a psychic mate, enhanced by receiving a foreign source of power, and destabilized by a chaotic veil of unholy energy. :'(
Satoku---The angst tag is there for a reason, though this is only the tip of the iceberg. The Fallarbor incident will, one day, seem like a relatively minor crisis to Slash and Psymakio.
The next chapter picks up the pace, as they travel through the ashlands and confront an incredibly powerful opponent. Plus a certain sexy redhead is introduced, though she won't get her proper limelight until the chapter AFTER this recent update. I planned to continue Twisted until they reached Fallarbor, but I was already a little late with this chapter, and stopped at 9000 words.
And heh, if I can't do a mating season in the main Sinners story, it'd make good oneshot material. That reminds me...after chapter 27 is out, I'll finally be able to write my long-planned Flannery-tastic oneshot, since she'll have a real personality and all (she makes a bad first impression on Slash in 26, despite coming to his aid, lol). Yay...
Psyence--Two updates in a little more than a week? OH HO HO. I like this new update style.
Vyers---That's exactly what Slash is. He doesn't really know what's happening to him; all he knows is that it's fucking with his mind and his (barely understood) powers, and it's starting to put himself and his pack in danger. Until the pack meets with the Second Storyteller (who isn't THAT far off anymore), they'll be mostly in the dark.
As for foreshadowing...seeing as the entity that put the hourglass in Slash's head was insanely powerful, it would take another insanely powerful entity to move it. Plus you'd have to find someone to put it IN, and I doubt many people would want to volunteer for that, lol.
Thecakenator---That's fucked me up, too. It appears to have stopped the review spam problem though, at least in the sections of AFF that I frequent. I'm training myself to copy my reviews before submitting them.
And yes, I like the update style, too. Much less stressful for me.
Kitsune_Writer---Chapter 26 is out now, and 27 is on the way. Hooray!
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February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter! I was waiting to see when you'll bring Flannery in again. Now I can't wait for the next chapter. It was a good idea splitting the longer chapter into shorter parts.
Keep up the good work.
Keep up the good work.
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February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Spectacular as always. I'm glad to see Blaziken appear. Best Pokemon EVER (with Gardevoir, Lucario and Staraptor coming close seconds).
I may have to write my own serious story featuring those at some stage.
I may have to write my own serious story featuring those at some stage.