rate_review Reviews

WOOO! I managed to read the three last chapters finally! it took me all night but i finally done it XD

I'm two chapters away from the finish... and I just have to say... Cataclysm. Aptly named. I started reading at 10 at night, and am now putting my computer away at 2:23 AM. >.< I love your story more than my well being...

I've greatly enjoyed your writing for sinners since i started reading it a week ago. you are a fantastic writer and have actually made me think back to some published books lacking the same quality you've shown here.

Never use slash's team in pokemon online... trust me, fully evo'd they still blow, with surprisingly Cacturn getting the most kills with sucker punch.

well thats awsome to hear slash, but i have one very important question... is this gonna be a continues series or will it end? i hope its continues because this actually is better than my books that i read... i am very very sewious btw i might consider writing too!(darn you and your provoking of my terrible skills)

Yeah but if you're honestly DEAD (car accident, meteor strike, overtaken by corruption) we'd not even get that.

Good luck with your issues, hope you find some solace soon.

something tells me this is dead... not even like dead dead either its just... dead....

Not dead. Severely delayed due to IRL complications, but not dead. The next chapter is actually about half done, and has been for months...I just haven't had the time to deal with it.

Once things are calmed down and stable, I'll be getting back to it. Like I've said before, if I really didn't want to deal with the story anymore, I'd give it a rushed ending rather than just abandoning it.

Welp, several months ago, I read through the first part of this, and was impressed by the immense amount of vivid language you used to make it seem rather life-like. I had kept hoping for this Arc 2 to be put up and was frustrated in waiting for you to send an update on the original piece where this all started. So, several months later, I grew bored again and began reading some other fics. w/i the Pokemon domains, and eventually came across Sinners Arc 2. My emotions can't really be summed up in a few words so I'll let my emotion face express the excitement I felt:

^O^

So a few more weeks later, I finally managed to catch back up to date with your story, and don't take it the wrong way, but I can not only picture the events happening in this story now, but I actually feel the events a little more. Like when you describe crackling bones either from ribs being broken from being smashed or from Kiako's body readjusting itself it literally makes me shudder with a chill going down my spine... *shudders* Or like the lemony scenes, I can't help but give credit where credit is due for causing me to become slightly excited when reading those sections. Anyway, heh-heh, I just wanna say that I've been impressed by your work so far and that I think your style of writing seems to have been enhanced since Arc 1. I say kudos to you, sir for the well done job of making this story an absolute blast for me to read.

Keep up the excellent work, dude. 8^]

Eh, this story is okay, I guess. It's not very good, but it's not very bad either. Kinda jumbled,a bit incorrhent at time, but meh, it's okay.
4/10