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September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
>Zannthebored
Look about ten comments up. Already been mentioned.
>Robo
You won't get an ED article to be re-writ, anyway.
Look about ten comments up. Already been mentioned.
>Robo
You won't get an ED article to be re-writ, anyway.
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September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello is anyone out there i'm not dead just in a lot of pain can somone lower a rope so i can get out of here and punish the person who wrote this sinful story
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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
REVIEWERS!
TONIGHT
WE DINE
IN HOENN!
300 reviews and counting.
THIS
IS
SINNERS!
*Kicks a Jirachian down a pit*
TONIGHT
WE DINE
IN HOENN!
300 reviews and counting.
THIS
IS
SINNERS!
*Kicks a Jirachian down a pit*
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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lol...someone had to do it eventually...I knew it. :P
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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well Slash, been a while... (cough) so how's that chapter comin'?
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August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What can I say...except wow, this rocks. I'm no unskilled writer myself, and this looks well put together. Looking forward to seeing how it all turns out.
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August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey hey.
Well, I didn't like my 19,000+ word chapter before I posted it...so I deleted it completely. Anyway, I just published the second version, 21,000+ Words, and now I have breathing room...Yikes.
This chapter hit hard emotion wise, which is a very difficult thing to write, for me anyway. It'd be tough sitting down and writing realistic reactions to something like this, and your ability to do so is off the charts. Excellent Chapter, a great, even theatrical twist thrown in there, and of course, a dose of humor.
Honestly, when I write, I try to bring my chapters and writing skill up to par with yours, and that's not an easy thing to do. Heh.
All the best, and great job.
Well, I didn't like my 19,000+ word chapter before I posted it...so I deleted it completely. Anyway, I just published the second version, 21,000+ Words, and now I have breathing room...Yikes.
This chapter hit hard emotion wise, which is a very difficult thing to write, for me anyway. It'd be tough sitting down and writing realistic reactions to something like this, and your ability to do so is off the charts. Excellent Chapter, a great, even theatrical twist thrown in there, and of course, a dose of humor.
Honestly, when I write, I try to bring my chapters and writing skill up to par with yours, and that's not an easy thing to do. Heh.
All the best, and great job.
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August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
To RoboRed
I saw that pic a long tim ago and this story wasthe first thing I thought of i agree with you 100% it could totally be her.
Oh and Slash if there is no update soon i still have the flounder and it’s staring to rot so getting slapped by it will be even worse now.
With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
I saw that pic a long tim ago and this story wasthe first thing I thought of i agree with you 100% it could totally be her.
Oh and Slash if there is no update soon i still have the flounder and it’s staring to rot so getting slapped by it will be even worse now.
With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Alright, I deleted my last three in a row review spree, and went ahead and combined them all together right here, no edits. No need to have them adding three short reviews for random posts.
Review A
Yet another good, quite long chapter, congrats, you've created a chapter longer than some stories, and a quarter the size of the first chapter in my, well, what I'm now calling "My Epic"
Anyways, I read ED artical, I'll admit, I laughed, I think I also randomly god banned from 4chan because I started spam posting a bunch of Demolition truck thumbnails when I was bored and didn't have anything better to do. The ED artical was in bad taste, but they always are. Just ignore it. Luckily I found nothing about me on ED, which is a good thing, I might have had to call in someone to "Take care" of it.
Anyways, great chapter, continue on as I'll always be watching, from the screen, and from the sky.
This is CrazyIvan, signing off, semper phi, carry on...
Review B
Okay, I'm almost positive I had made a review on the cacturn chapter than involved questioning how Slash was so efficient at QCB. It's not like you can just pick up a knife and start killing stuff in an effective way (not just repeated stabbing), but it appears to have gone missing.
Also, I guess I wasn't paying attention, and I don't even know if you're still here, but Jack, Jack Nativity.
I have to give you applause, while I may agree on some points, and disagree on others, I have to hand it to you, that is the longest piece of constructive critisism I have ever seen.
And while there does seem to be alot of dues ex machina going on, it is Slash's story, and he does what he want with it.
I'll admit some of the things are cliche, but what isn't these days? My fic is a government agent kicking ass, there is absolutely nothing orignal about that what so ever. On top of that, he rescues an undercover, hot agent chick, and bangs her. IT'S LIKE A FUCKING JAMES BOND MOVIE FOR FUCKS SAKE! (Although in fairness, the chick is based of my own ex girl-friend, [funnily enough, I find Rhett Olson as my Western counterpart in most of my fanfictions, and my own self as, well, me. I tend to reuse names and characters quite often, and it seems to work out well enough)
My point is, in this day an age, there isn't much orignality left to go around, which is why I work so damn hard on my epic, and it's still full of non-originality.
Alright, anyways, trying this again.
Semper phi, carry on...
PS, Slash, if I find out you delete this review, I'll drop a tungsten rod on your house. I'm not really critisizing you, but you do tend to over react a bit. Just try and work on that, and no, I won't use a joker line, because the new batman movie is just (tilts hand back and forth). Also, needs more jet powered super car batmobile, not look it's a fucking battank.
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LOL 3RD REVIEW IN A ROW
Sorry, with a bit of quick CTRL+F ing I found the review, guess i missed it on the run through of the reviews there.
Review A
Yet another good, quite long chapter, congrats, you've created a chapter longer than some stories, and a quarter the size of the first chapter in my, well, what I'm now calling "My Epic"
Anyways, I read ED artical, I'll admit, I laughed, I think I also randomly god banned from 4chan because I started spam posting a bunch of Demolition truck thumbnails when I was bored and didn't have anything better to do. The ED artical was in bad taste, but they always are. Just ignore it. Luckily I found nothing about me on ED, which is a good thing, I might have had to call in someone to "Take care" of it.
Anyways, great chapter, continue on as I'll always be watching, from the screen, and from the sky.
This is CrazyIvan, signing off, semper phi, carry on...
Review B
Okay, I'm almost positive I had made a review on the cacturn chapter than involved questioning how Slash was so efficient at QCB. It's not like you can just pick up a knife and start killing stuff in an effective way (not just repeated stabbing), but it appears to have gone missing.
Also, I guess I wasn't paying attention, and I don't even know if you're still here, but Jack, Jack Nativity.
I have to give you applause, while I may agree on some points, and disagree on others, I have to hand it to you, that is the longest piece of constructive critisism I have ever seen.
And while there does seem to be alot of dues ex machina going on, it is Slash's story, and he does what he want with it.
I'll admit some of the things are cliche, but what isn't these days? My fic is a government agent kicking ass, there is absolutely nothing orignal about that what so ever. On top of that, he rescues an undercover, hot agent chick, and bangs her. IT'S LIKE A FUCKING JAMES BOND MOVIE FOR FUCKS SAKE! (Although in fairness, the chick is based of my own ex girl-friend, [funnily enough, I find Rhett Olson as my Western counterpart in most of my fanfictions, and my own self as, well, me. I tend to reuse names and characters quite often, and it seems to work out well enough)
My point is, in this day an age, there isn't much orignality left to go around, which is why I work so damn hard on my epic, and it's still full of non-originality.
Alright, anyways, trying this again.
Semper phi, carry on...
PS, Slash, if I find out you delete this review, I'll drop a tungsten rod on your house. I'm not really critisizing you, but you do tend to over react a bit. Just try and work on that, and no, I won't use a joker line, because the new batman movie is just (tilts hand back and forth). Also, needs more jet powered super car batmobile, not look it's a fucking battank.
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LOL 3RD REVIEW IN A ROW
Sorry, with a bit of quick CTRL+F ing I found the review, guess i missed it on the run through of the reviews there.
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August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, I might add however, the first part of it put me back on a path for depresion, a path I finaly thought I was off.
I dont know weather to hug you or slap you, either way, keep up the great work.
I dont know weather to hug you or slap you, either way, keep up the great work.