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Words cannot express the awesomeness that is Sinners. :3
Rock on. ^o^

Hey Hey
Oh, trolls are bad, kill w/ fire or they come back. (Fucking regen)

anyway One hell of a fucking chapter. Did not see the time limit thing coming. Despite what the trolls say, this story has been making me think about things in an entirely different way. I dunno how you do it man.

Questions:
1) What was the story that inspired this?
2) Could you elaborate one your rules for pokeballs/TMS ( if i missed it im sorry)
3) How did you start writing this at all? I mean, i think i could write something really good, but im too afraid that i would to heavily reference other influences and get called out (ex: hey... this seems an awful lot like the scene in *movie/book*)

"I love you, Psymakio. Whatever I become in the future...whether a corpse or a monster...know that I love you. Forever."

The beauty of this line really struck a chord in my heart D:

Also, how do you do your outlines? I've been writing things off and on over the years, but absolutely nothing has taken off past vague ideas and a shitty first chapter, though recently I've got something that I think I can really write out now. Think you'll ever put an outline to one of your older chapters on the webernets one day?

Two things in this review as I seem to be doing a lot:
1) Glad I could be of service to you, and that my random wondering caused you to sit down and figure things out for later on. Perhaps I inadvertently saved you a bit of work, lol.

2) A response to "Now we have a new cliffhanger in regards to the hourglass...how does one destroy the indestructible?":
May I direct you to this link - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wFaXTcR4dtE
My answer begins approximately 2 minutes and 15 seconds in.

Great story, Slash!
This is the best fanfiction of anything I've ever read and is in the top ten stories I've ever read, too. And, I've read quite a lot.
You've given me so much to think about by writing Sinners. Not just about the story, either.
And, this story does not suffer from the EPIC.

I think that the shadow may not be Darkrai as we’ve all thought it might be Giratina I have only a theory mostly because it said the shadow appeared so suddenly and Giratina can travel freely between the worlds and in the game it was sealed away and Darkrai was roaming free I know slash only loosely uses the game as a reference but still. I know that I’m probably wrong about this but my Otaku brain chibi came up with it and the others said if he’s right than he’ll get a cookie if not than all the others are going to beat him with socks full of batteries and garden hoses full of ball bearings

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

*listens to song*

Oh yeah...I'd say it defiitely just about fits the theme to a T. :) I already love Coldplay anyways, I just never hear enough of it because I don't listen to music on the radio often.

Hey, It's the anon back again with a few more song suggestions now that I actually sat down and remembered.

1. Waking the Demon by Bullet for my Valentine
This ones for those who like metalish (is that a word?) music, I thought this fit pretty well with the whole crazy, evil, murdering side of Slash.

2. Reverse this Curse by Escape the Fate
This ones punk rock but it kind of made me think it fit into the whole, "OMG! I'm gonna die because of a curse and now my wife's gonna live without me!?!"

Ugh, what's with all this radio-friendly rock and metalcore being suggested for my definitely metal-and-postrock-backed Sinners? You're not spared, either, Slash - the only time Bon Jovi nailed it was covering Bob Geldof :P

The background music in my head for Sinners is almost always Opeth. Grand Conjuration, Face of Melinda and Blackwater Park being the favourites. Pad that out with some of the more aggressive and lengthy Mogwai and you have a soundtrack fitting for such a grand story.

This new chapter is fantastic, Slash, though it's going to be a juggling act to set the proper mood - the TV series Supernatural couldn't do it (happy happy happy immadiesoon sad happy happy happy), but I think you can.

I already knew the answer to the baby hint. I'm henceforth forcing myself to stop stalking your livejournal and its comments.

"Who knows where Jirachi is...

...and who says Jirachi isn't the one responsible for the curse in the first place? :-O"

Funny thing is, this is who I suspected did it seeing as how you used the word 'wish' a bit too many times to not be noticable.