rate_review Reviews

Definately one of the best-written stories here at AFF.

Inspiration abounds eh Iota?

Oh wow, I was not expecting to catch all the way up to the most recent chapter of this story. I've gotta say that this has to be among one of the best Pokemon stories on the net, period. Not only do you keep within the original world of Pokemon, but you also develop several new aspects that blend in so perfectly that it had me reading this for days. I simply love the idea of a Kaishakunin as well as the bond they and their trainers share.

I wonder how many people went "NO!" when you denied them the Blaziken/Flannery, not that this story has sex every chapter, but still, that's something I know a few fans probably would have liked.

Really, though, this is a VERY impressive story, and tip my hat to you. It's this story that's probably restored my like for Pokemon fics, instead of just Pokegirls.

@ Josh,

Agreed, I have my own theorys, none that I will share in case any are right...wouldent wana ruin it if I was...

Great story, I had to spend around, 20 hours or so reading, counting the oneshots, and still had to neglect part of my, "real" (for lack of better term), life to make that, I hope you consider writing as a career, I personaly think you would excel at it.

I must say one thing that kind of struck me about the story, it has a forbiden love thing (tho thats obvious) not unlike a modern, religious (somewhat), pokemorphed (-_- I need to find a better word for that), romeo and juliet (I never actualy read the damn book and spelling is not MY strong sute, so sorry for misspellings).

I love it, keep up the great work...I'm off to go get my frends to read this

Ralts - anagram of "relates" (it relates to its trainer's feelings)
Kirlia - derived from Kirlian photography, developed by Seymon Kirlian, to photograph the magnetic force each of us gives off (1939)
Gardevoir - devoir (to have to) + guard

Mind = Blown

I don't usually review, but this story is good. Really, really good. Your characters are well-developed and unique without being ridiculous in power and personality. As well, the overall world they live in is also excellently developed, especially the predator-prey relationships of Pokemon, the impact of trainers, and particularly the nature of humanity and the rejection of fear and prejudice struck me.

To say I eagerly await the next chapter would be an understatement, the next arcs as well even, although not at the cost of length and quality naturally. At this point there's nary a nit to pick with the story, really just a matter of getting better and better as you go along, which I can't wait to see.

First chapter: It's lemony delicious!

I'd love to help with the comic, but I am rather caught up in my own Pokemon fic, Before I Forget. Here's two pics I did. Not too proud of them, especially Dawn. Just feels so out of character.


An Older Dawn (UNFINISHED!!!)

http://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/topic/918533

Riou Maddox (OC of BIF and UNFINISHED)

http://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/topic/915015

Wow, I haven't been reading Sinners for a while, but these past two chapters are electrifying! I wonder how Flannery is going to be involved with Slash and co.

Hey, what can I say...

This is probably the best story of any kind I've ever read. It's a simple as that, something like this should be in movie theaters... Though with some of the scenes, I dont think mothers would let their kids go and see "The new adult pokemon movie" heh.

Regardless, the story is great and It has actually inspired me to sit down and write a story I've been meaning to for a long long time now. Don't worry, I've gone to extreme lengths to avoid any similarities to your story, I want to make sure It's 100% original.

I sat down yesterday, and in two days time, I've managed to get a chapter out.

If you have time, let me know what you think :o

It's going to involve a Trainer and a female Lucario. Also, Project Crucifix, which is foreshadowed in the first chapter...Check it out :o

(That goes for anyone else reading this)

http://anime.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600044367

Ash really does cheat and here's proof

Ash has the most Pokémon that know moves that they can't learn in the games:

Caterpie with Counter

Bulbasaur with Tickle,Dig, and Whirlwind

Raticate with Hi Jump Kick

Staravia with Gust

Larvitar with Harden

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae