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Satoku---Whenever I try that URL, it crashes my browser (Firefox). It does that when I go to the site on my own and try to make a 'word cloud' or whatever, too...

Yes, I am still alive and fully intend to respond to all reviews and update very soon. I've actually been writing more in the past week than I have in a very long time, so that's good---I'm back in my writing zone!

IMPORANT NOTE---From now on, I'll be responding to all reviews (including those made since my last reply) via my chapter update e-mails. AFF doesn't like people responding to reviews with reviews, and I've been rather guilty of that (to be fair, there really should be a simple reply system for authors...). If you want to see responses to your reviews, sign up for the mailing list if you haven't already by e-mailing me at slashfirestorm@inbox.com!

Expect the next chapter within the month. I mean it this time---it's moving along smoothly and happily, which is a rarity.

Two things

1. Is Slash dead or what?
2. Slash is in this article

http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/TearJerker/FanFiction

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

Great story, one of the best things I've read. I'm now going to note a few things with the plot that could be used to make the story better (or perhaps just different). Firstly, the guy in the desert (Janus?) didn't save Psymakio. You might use this so that either Slash doesn't die from the lack of lifetime, or Janus is forced to save Psymakio if she is going to die. The second thing is more interesting. Regigigas (that is the king, isn't it?) created the Gardevoir species. The ancient Gardevoir (forgot the name, sorry) didn't have children. But, the species is still alive a long time in the future? That could mean several things, most (but not all) of them with the ability to impact the storyline.

Sorry if I somehow offended you, I didn't try to.

just thought you'd appreciate knowing that you have a file on encyclopedia dramatica. in a way something to be proud of as only interesting and/or skilled writers actually get their own insulting file.

WHERE ARE YOU? THIS STORY BEST NOT BE LEFT UNFINISHED!

Heya, I decided to look up anything having anything to do with my favorite pokemon Gardevoir one day out of sheer boredom. Thats when a single word caught my attention, the word being "Sinners". Upon reading this goldmine of a tale I was a little unsure of what to expect. But as I delved deeper into this highly descriptive adventure I quickly became immersed in this more "mature" pokemon world as if I was right there with cocky Slash, endearing Psymakio (Whos name is VERY close to that of my Gardevoir "Psykimiko") and the comic relief that is Crawdaunt. Thank you for merely existing because you have risen up as one of the inspirations for my writings (Only to be outdone by John Lennon that is). If I could keep in close contact with you I would greatly appreciate it, thank you. P.S. Why in the hell do your Gardevoirs have tits?

I enjoyed your story very much -- both Arcs 1 and 2. It's so much more than simple AFF -- I think that Sinners is on a whole different level than most other fanfics, pokemon or not.

May I suggest bringing in Jessie and James? Since you mentioned Ash Ketchum in one chapter, I don't think it would be too much of a digression to have them in a chapter, even if they're minor characters.

I love the way you've portrayed Pokemon and the world that they exist in; you've made it so 3-dimensional. I'm never going to play the games again, since they would be too much of a letdown after Sinners. :P

Thanks a lot, keep up the great work.


PS. I have a Gardevoir in Pokemon Emerald. It knows Thunderbolt. :)

Sinners is awesome and I can't wait for the next chapter, the demon stirs I think you said it would be. I'm almost dying of anticipation, hurry!

So you played EarthBound, huh? Classic game.

Not that I want to delay Sinners further, but you should also look into Mother 3. It's also excellent.

I'm actually quite pleased with this chapter. Kiako(past)'s motivations are excellently built and much better than the "I'm better than god/I rule therefore I SHOULD rule" that he had going.

The Shadow being a pokemon (or some sort of primordial uber-pokemon-like entity) is a bit of a minus, though. I never liked never-ending-absolute-chaos having an avatar, as it's contradictory to the concept of Chaos itself. Unless it's more of an appointed-avatar, like Nyarlathotep (who doesn't have a fit form anyway). I understand canon be damned, but Darkrai was also a dark-is-not-evil type of thing in Pokemon.
What IS Darkrai's motivation, anyway? Return all to the chaos?

Oh, and that Regigigas pic can be found here instead.
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=534331