rate_review Reviews

At last new chapter from the stuff with Flannery I take it that a lot of people can talk with their pokemon regardless of type and I suspect that they have a relationship that’s more than trainer and pokemon.

I wonder how would Slash’s parents react I mean a lot of people in the real world make funny of furries and even worse in the Sinners world at the very least they’d disown him and I don’t even want to think of the worst outcome.

Oh one thing I think I know who the King, Shadow, And Interloper are I’m not saying for now but I’ 99% sure of it.

So the second character you’ve brought in is Lance I wonder what will he do later on I mean he’s one of the best trainers going so I bet he’ll be important for the whole battle that’s coming up soon right?

The voice that Psymaiko heard is something that won’t have it’s nature reveled for a while I just know it but I also know that what ever it is it has something to do with their past lives that have been mentioned right ? Just like Kiako I don’t know what it is exactly I just know that it has some connection to who they were that’s very important to who they are and will become.

I love the whole shield thing to keep the sand away I love anything that has to do with defense because I believe that a good defense is the best strategy because it doesn’t matter who strong the attack if it can’t get trough than it useless so I’m willing to bet that she’ll have to protect everyone from something very soon .

I think he should of at least let the Sandshrew travel with them for a littlie while as more or less a guide at least until they got closer to the exit and as for the seventh member I think it will be one of the types slash doesn’t have yet so that the pack will be more balanced.

The barrier blocking Slash’s kiss was really cut and funny I could just picture him bouncing back a short distance because of it and her littlie squeal of surprise was just a cute. I just love the way they tease each other like that and I can’t wait to see how much he will be able to do with his powers I’m sure he’ll be able to surpass what he did in Afterglow later on in the plot.

Ah man she masturbated when she was a Kirlia that make’s me think of a lot of pics I saw on AD I whish that you hadn’t waited this long to tell us about that I’d have loved to know about what she was doing. And that whole thing about if he’d walked in own her is one of my most common fantasies catching a girl like that and getting to do all kinds of things.

I can’t believe that the only thing that was lost was the antidote poor Psymaiko I hope she doesn’t have to suffer very long and that Electrike doesn’t have any trouble at all I mean I know that they’ll get trough this but still…

All in all I have to say that like all ways this chapter was great and I can’t wait for the next one which hopefully won’t take as long as this one because I hate to wait. Oh and one last thing that has nothing to do with anything I think that Magikarp is one of the best pokemon ever and if pokemon were real I’d be able to win nearly ever battle with a level one Magikarp by whacking the other person upside the head with it.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

You've really never played Exalted, huh? Massive coincidence in all the parallels, though. Ah, whatever, the universe was made on coincidences.

[insanity]
[pointless rant about exalted that won't make sense to anyone]
My belief is that Slash is a Twilight Solar bonded to Psymakio, who is a Full Moon Lunar, as they live in a world ruled by Dragon-Blooded-Trainers and must pose among them or be slain as Anathema. This would take place during a warped Third Age, where pokemon are what became of the Lesser Spirits, and the Celestial Incarnae/Dragons became the Legendaries. (Perhaps Lunars became pokemon, or pokemon can be one of their True forms and due to the lack of the Wyld they can't transform out of it, and eventually forgot about it)
And Kiako seems to be a Dusk Caste Abyssal, who was cast down from a potential position among the Deathlords and is chaotically working his way back up, albeit with his own Celestial Monstrance built into himself.
[/pointless rant about exalted that won't make sense to anyone]

Also, on an unrelated note, whenever I think about Kiako's character, I can only see him looking like Alucard from Hellsing. Except less casual and less crucifix-laden.
[/insanity]

Once again, a marvelous (mega)chapter in the Sinners series, and it was well worth the wait (the penguins were becoming restless...). I like the way that this is being written out, with the inclusion of Flannery & Blaziken, and the mysterious red-haired figure (methinks Lance, but I could be wrong), it ever more illustrates the fact that Slash is not the only one involved in this. I can't wait to see more of what happens from Flannery's POV (in both ways...you know what I mean. :P). As usual, the sex was great, though this one was a quickie. It's also really cool that Slash can now actually 'hear' his poke'mon talking now.

And of couse you've left the story with a cliffhanger again, and with something I never once expected. I thought that Gardie would end up with a serious wound. And now I am definitely hooked into waiting really actively for the next chapter (as if I wasn't already :P). The good thing though is that we all know Gardie's gonna live (possibly with an interesting twist in the storyline though), the story can't go on without her. She's an integral part of Sinners.

---
On the other hand though...if she did die, the story would take a very dark turn...and I DO like dark...>:D

P.S. I wish there would have been a bit more of ass-kicking done by Slash. (sorry...in my book, a knife throw to the leg counts as a great move, not an ass-kicking.)

Oh, and that voice in the desert, I think that might have something to do with the interloper. Miyako sounds like a name...a female name. The interloper is female, and sounds like she lost someone (as mentioned earlier in I-forget-which-and-am-too-fucking-lazy-to-look-it-up Chapter).

I'm loving this story more and more after each chapter. It's wonderfully written.
Keep up the good work!

You BASTARD! You made a f**king HUGE cliffhanger! AND I HATE CLIFFHANGERS! If you take as long to get the next chapter out as you did with this one then I swear, I will do SOMETHING. I am not sure what, but rest assured it will be bad. Also, Great story.

SLASH

GOD DAMN YOU

LEAVING A CLIFFHANGER LIKE THAT

Hurry up with the next chapter, or the suspense is going to kill me D:

I want to open a daycare center now.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6JZzKJTng1U

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

Update soon the pandas are getting restless and if there’s not a new chapter soon there going to your home town you’ll know when they get there because all the pets will begin to disappear.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

Slash where are you?! WE MISS YOU!!!!