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March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Alright Slash, if your character dies in the story without being able to take out that fucker Kiako. I'LL pick up the peices and finish the fucker off myself. XD
You know I got the character that can do it too. O_o
You know I got the character that can do it too. O_o
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March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That's so unrealistic. How come neither of them ever have to pee immediately after waking up?
But I jest :P. Very well written story, I'm hooked and waiting for the next chapter.
But I jest :P. Very well written story, I'm hooked and waiting for the next chapter.
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March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I am absolutely floored by this beautiful story. I absolutely love the characters, and the relationship is incredible. I really can't describe it, but it's my second absolute favorite fanfiction ever, and I've read hundreds of incredible stories.
The only thing I don't like is the dark portrayal of Humanity. I prefer to see it that Humanity is on all points of the scale of Light and Dark, if such scales are real, because everything known to be bad and everything known to be good has come from Humanity.
The only thing I don't like is the dark portrayal of Humanity. I prefer to see it that Humanity is on all points of the scale of Light and Dark, if such scales are real, because everything known to be bad and everything known to be good has come from Humanity.
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March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well I'm back.I liked the most recent chapter.THe perfect song for if Slash is overcome3 by rage is "Animal I have become". It even has a lyric realting to slash's Dark Heart.Well I'm gonna be anticipating the Sinners aniversary One-shot.Well Goodbye for now.I'll see you all on Brawl.Also As Mugen from Samurai Champloo said "I'll take all you bitches on"(One of my all time favorite quotes).
PS.I find the janus story very intresting.
PS.I find the janus story very intresting.
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March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I wrote the same review for your prior section of the story, but since it seems like there haven't been a lot in the last couple months there, I figured I'd copy it here too.
You really do have an amazing story. What interests me isn't the sex, or the main plot, but the way you describe the bond and love between the two. Eeven as a very secretive person, I can understand how interesting a psychic bond could be, what with the feedback, and everything about your soul exposed. Plus, I'm not completely attracted to my own species(or any other, for that matter), so the idea of having a relationship with a creature similar, but different, more innocent and free of humanity's cancerous touch, like a beacon of light really, makes it sound even more wonderful.
You really do have an amazing story. What interests me isn't the sex, or the main plot, but the way you describe the bond and love between the two. Eeven as a very secretive person, I can understand how interesting a psychic bond could be, what with the feedback, and everything about your soul exposed. Plus, I'm not completely attracted to my own species(or any other, for that matter), so the idea of having a relationship with a creature similar, but different, more innocent and free of humanity's cancerous touch, like a beacon of light really, makes it sound even more wonderful.
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March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I wonder what happens when that 'RAGE' door comes off...?
Something fun to watch, thats for sure.
Something fun to watch, thats for sure.
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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Xain---If I remember correctly, those little veggie-monsters had a power level of 1200 each. You need to get stronger if you want to stand a chance against those freaky little fucks.
Araquiell---Heh, it seems people like dialogue. Whew. I have been pleasantly surprised by the reception to 20. Although I can't be sure about anything in Sinners until it's been written, the next few chapters should go action, dialogue, action/dialogue, END OF THE FUCKING WORLD. :-D
Not literally, of course, but...I'm very eager to get to the Fallarbor confrontation. I think everyone's gonna be surprised with what I've got in store for them. Some crazy shit is gonna go down. ^_^
Araquiell---Heh, it seems people like dialogue. Whew. I have been pleasantly surprised by the reception to 20. Although I can't be sure about anything in Sinners until it's been written, the next few chapters should go action, dialogue, action/dialogue, END OF THE FUCKING WORLD. :-D
Not literally, of course, but...I'm very eager to get to the Fallarbor confrontation. I think everyone's gonna be surprised with what I've got in store for them. Some crazy shit is gonna go down. ^_^
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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Here's a gift for Psymaiko's birthday
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CG5Iv8VE1hM
With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CG5Iv8VE1hM
With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woo-hoo! It's back! And welcome back!
I'll be honest with you, I think this is the first chapter of Sinners I really allll the way through. Most other chapters I've skimmed, especially at the beginning of the series, but now I'm really hooked. I should probably go back and re-read some chapters so I'd find out what's Kiako's story with his body.
Looking forward to the adventures in the desert. Team Slash was warned about the dangerous Pokemon within the desert. Of course, that HAS to mean they're going to get into huge trouble with said Pokemon. Poor team got jinxed, heh.
And now I have to wait next month for the next chapter. Nooooo! Ah well. I haven't read the other reviews yet, so I probably am just repeating someone else's question -- any hints as to what the next one-shot will be about?
I'll be honest with you, I think this is the first chapter of Sinners I really allll the way through. Most other chapters I've skimmed, especially at the beginning of the series, but now I'm really hooked. I should probably go back and re-read some chapters so I'd find out what's Kiako's story with his body.
Looking forward to the adventures in the desert. Team Slash was warned about the dangerous Pokemon within the desert. Of course, that HAS to mean they're going to get into huge trouble with said Pokemon. Poor team got jinxed, heh.
And now I have to wait next month for the next chapter. Nooooo! Ah well. I haven't read the other reviews yet, so I probably am just repeating someone else's question -- any hints as to what the next one-shot will be about?
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March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOOHOO! another chapter! I really enjoyed this one as well, I don't mind that it was a lot of dialogue, I think you're doing an amazing job on this story. I can't wait for the next chapter, everything's getting very exciting. I do like how you've gone and put a bunch of information about things like the desert and all that, really makes the storyline and the challenges they face seem much more real.