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Imasuky Lomae---The Interloper is going to be revealed more in future chapters, although a resolution of that problem may not occur for some time.

I won't say much about the confrontation at Fallarbor, other than that a lot of opposing forces (some not revealed yet) are being drawn to the same location...and it's not going to be pretty when everyone arrives.

I'm still ticked that they had "Pokemon Trainer" as a character, but Gardevoir was nothing more than a Pokeball appearance (and no Golden Sun characters? BAH). That's not making me want to get a Wii...

Xain---Laziness must not get in the way of the anniversary special. I WILL NOT ALLOW IT TO

Black Whole---Heh, it seems that this chapter has been received much better than I expected. Can't complain about that, lol.

The incomprehensible words are a nuance of telepathic communication. Telepathy is much more efficient than spoken speech, and there are terms that are packed with more information than a single spoken word could carry. Beings that don't naturally use telepathy have difficulty understanding such language.

As for Fallarbor...I think everyone will be surprised at what's going on there. It won't be what anyone expects, I'll say that.

I view the Pokemon Academy as covering common Pokemon more than relatively rare ones, and really from more of a trainer perspective than a zoologist's. They might teach about how to capture a Pokemon, but not how that Pokemon breeds or interacts with others of its kind unless it's pertinent for the trainer to know.

Of course, one could also say that I just needed a way to explain the hazards of the desert in a dramatic manner, too...lol.

Sinners Fan---Glad you enjoyed! Chapter 21 should be out sometime in April (as the anniversary special will keep me occupied for the rest of March).

RoboRed---Ha, I know, I kept finding myself thinking of Afterglow as part of canon...but alas, in the main Sinners storyline, there has been no water sex.

Yet, hehe.

I didn't intend to reveal so much about the Interloper when I began the chapter, but I realized that there's not going to be much downtime until after the Fallarbor incident is resolved, so I decided to go ahead with it. The Interloper's nature as a pitiable but potentially malevolent spirit, driven by madness and obsession...heh, yeah.

I was playing Brawl and got a Gardevoir trophy first thing I did was look it’s skirt before I started reading Sinners I never would have given it a second thought oh and one other thing I didn’t pre-order Brawl one of the Gamestop guys just let me go ahead and buy even though they were only supposed to sell it to people who preordered

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

If you manage to update ON that date you're a better man then I am. XD
I'll update someday when I get off my ass!

Imasuky Lomae---My favorite trophy from Melee was Marin (Legend of Zelda: Link's Awakening). Damn, she was awesome. I still intend to write an epic Link's Awakening fic someday.

Xain---Well, I've already begun brainstorming for the anniversary oneshot...and ya know, I'm eventually going to reach their birthdays in the true Sinners storyline, so I'll get to cover them there, too. :-D

In Sinners, it's currently September 25, so we've still got a way to go. Slash's is on December 23, Psymakio's is March 29, and Kiako's is June 23 (but we're not going to celebrate his, lol).

Scanner activates* *I remove the scanner from my ear and break it in my left hand*
IT'S OVER ONE-THOUSAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAND!

Genoliger---Hope you have better luck writing than I had with chapter 20, lol.

Xain---I doubt I even need to look. OVER 9000!!!!!!!!!!!!

I tend to avoid youtube. My computer is pretty decent, but for some odd reason it sucks at playing high quality flash or pretty much any video. Bleh.

Well, sorry I was so fucking late, but I'm uploading 20 now. :-D

Vyers---The talking drove me craaaazy. I had so much information I needed to get out before they got to the desert, but so little time and not much else happening...hell, half the damn chapter takes place when they're asleep. XD

Ah, well. The next chapter will be the trip through the desert, and it'll be more action-packed.

This chapter was around 16000 words, which is the second longest so far (Death From Above was ~22000). It took so long because I'm a fucking lazy bum who gets easily distracted by trivial things. Plus I had to finalize my citizenship in the last month or two, so I had to go across town to various government offices and such. Bleh.

Great chapter as always I don’t know where to begin other than I still have no idea who or what the Interloper actually is and I’ve been kind of half thinking that Rayquaza was probably the one attacking I’m not sure what’s going to happen but I have a few thoughts and can’t wait to find out what happens next oh an as a side note I was playing the new super smash bros. game and I had two that’s 2 Gardevoir out at the same time but it was training mode so I sadly couldn’t take a picture

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

IT'S OVER 9000??? HOW IS THAT EVEN POSSIBLE, HUH SLASH!?!?

This chapter was around 16000 words, which is the second longest so far (Death From Above was ~22000). It took so long because I'm a fucking lazy bum who gets easily distracted by trivial things. Plus I had to finalize my citizenship in the last month or two, so I had to go across town to various government offices and such. Bleh.


That defines me EXACTLY. O_o
Now you know why my story isn't at chapter 6 right now. i'm fuckin lazy. XD