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UPDATE!

DO IT! DO IT NAOUGHW!!!

Lol...I was thinking about posting something along those lines...

Slash...update now, before I unleash the penguin army...:P

Thus far, after reading the third chapter, I must say I am a little... more disturbed reading the second arc. I quite have grown attached to the characters, especially Slash and Psymakio. The way everything is leading, it is as if the two will face such a disaster similar to a certain Shakespeare story involving two lovers. I would hope that would be not the case, but it makes for a great story with a tragic ending I suppose.

The battle with Watson is what caught my eye the most. I was surprised, shocked at how well the Pokemon were doing, only for Psymakio to lose I guess to... Night Shade? But nonetheless, two Electrike/Corphish combo worked well, and I especially love this scene.

And I might as well add I love the lemon scenes, heheh.

Also, to add to my view, I believe Siako attempts to kill Giovanni in some way or another, hinting at his supposed great power he will one day receive.

My Garderotica fic is posted heres the link

http://anime.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600043228

Hope everyone likes it.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

is arceus going to be in the story.can't wait for the next chapter

I will kiss the ass of the first person that reviews my story. Good or bad review I don't care I want to see if there actually ARE spelling errors in chapter two. Since I don't have a FUCKING spell checker OR proof reader. >_>

Hey, what do ya know! My first chapter put into one is a little over 9300 sweet! XD

Sounds like it has something too do with slash's 2 hearts. Then again i might've been playing Kingdom Hearts a little too much.its either that or Amnesia gets slash. Those are just educated guesses. I love a good mystery so I'll keep trying too figure it out. Could also have something too do with the other voice too and the doors in his mind.

Yes, unfortunately it's 130,000 words in a single unbroken chapter, and worse still, that's the shortest chapter as of now, although, I only have twelve of the forseen 100+ on my computer, 15 if you count the three yet to be typed up.

You mentioned chapter type, if you mean the viewpoints of three different Admirals (space fleets) well, I suppose each chapter has one to three different main sections, each devided into smaller sections (IE: Commander's view, sub commanders actions, commanders actions, chef cooking dinner, etc).

I have already contamplated giving each viewpoint it's own chapter, but that would just expand the number of chapters exponentialy (IE: 100 to 300). That woulnd't reduce the number of words, just spread them out.


I see you arn't really following either games or manga then when it comes to stats and other pokemon affiliated articals. Well, not alot of people do that anyways. (Although, funnily enough, Rayquaza is actualy one of the weakest Tier ones, despite the fact it has equal stat base with the others. I've had Dragonites that withstood more ice attacks that a Rayquaza, and on multible occasions, have defeated a Rayquaza quite easily with a singe outrage attack from my Dragonite.)

WEll, I think I've answered some of your questions, and put to rest some of mine.

Untill next time, semper phi, carry on.