rate_review Reviews

RoboRed---What'll happen next?

ADVENTURE :-O
ROMANCE :-*
TRAGEDY :'(
TORRID SEXUAL RELATIONS :-D

Xain---Yes. I personally love really long stories with really long chapters. It's so awesome to be able to read a story and not finish for a whole day. Or two.

One day, Sinners will be that long. Longer, even. AND THAT SCARES ME A LITTLE.

MrRandom---Glad you like it, heh. I still need to proof the earlier chapters...and I know that there are a few chapters where some of the quotation marks/apostrophes are messed up, because Microsoft Word is shit (I use OpenOffice now, and I personally like it better), so I need to fix those, too.

I don't know if Sinners is the best in the section, although I am a bit saddened by the lack of really long epic Pokemon fics. It might just be the Inverse Quality Phenomenon---the more popular a subject is, the lower the average quality of the fiction written for it. You can go to, say, the Harry Potter section and find countless shitty stories. And then you can head to the My Life As A Teenage Robot section and find a long, epic fiction that puts most stories to shame. XD

Reo690---Glad you love it. There will likely be more bumsex later, heheh. In fact, there may be some action before they get to Fallarbor, if I can make the time...we shall see.

TEN IS NOT IMPRESSIVE

Well, it's been a long time since I've left a proper review, although, there is not much else I can say. You still have the same grammar, spelling, and format. You think 22000 words on 44 pages is a long chapter. Normaly yes, which makes me wonder, I'm not sure if I can even put my upcoming chapters on here, I might just have to contact a damn publisher and release it as a book. The shortest chapter is 178pages with around 130,000 words, possibly more. Regardless, back to your fanficiton.

You've gotten back to the demon man and the pearls, this part of the story I seem to find more interesting. It's funny in a way, Rayquaza is powerful enough to scare Kaiko(Sp?), but Vladranov subdued the dragon effortlessly.


Vladranov: I am a descendent of Vahakran, High Lord of Balance, anything that varies either way from the path of balance has no power against me, I do not take pride in my strength, it is only how I am.

Anywho...
I have nothing more to say but what I always do, untill next time.
Semper phi, carry on...

Reo690 2008-01-11 id # 3000045493
Now, on to actually reviewing the story. This has got to be one of the most well written story that I have every read in my 17 years of reading, only a few come to the same par as this.


Hey, my fanfiction was pretty damn good if I do say so myself, especialy for my first god damn multi chapter fic, (Criminal Conspiracy, most of my other fics are not really too impresive, hell not many of them are even that good, but that one was)
I've learned alot since then, and a sequal is on it's way, it should be a hell of a lot more impressive (No offense Slash)
And nothing will compare to my masterpiece, which probably won't even be uploaded to AFF.

I mean, this fic is great, but don't try and belittle other authors, we try hard to put stuff up here, we take time out of our busy schedual to put stuff here for other lazy bums to read. (Although, truthfully, alot of the stuff here isn't that good)

Semper phi, carry on.

I usually try to review sinners through E-Mail with Slash. Sad thing is the newest chapter Slash made is fucking LONG. I'm probly not even half done reading it yet. O_o;
But in all honesty, that's when you know a story is that fuckin good.

Well Slash Firestorm, this is truely one marvel of a story you have. I do believe that I'm not alone when I say that this is the best story in the Pokemon section. There are very rarely spelling/grammatical errors, and the few that do exist don't pose any problem with the flow of the story. The detail through each of the chapters is simply overwhelming; it defies me how you are able to describe this story with such imagry. In any case, keep up the excellent work.

MrRandom

Now, on to actually reviewing the story. This has got to be one of the most well written story that I have every read in my 17 years of reading, only a few come to the same par as this. Now, for the obligatory death threat: OMG POKEMON/HUMAN BUMSECKS U'LL BURN IN HELL!!!1110100 You may also consider forming a Gardevior fansite, which I would join.

And I also got teh tenth review, suckers.

I got the first review here haha.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

Imasuky Lomae---Why, yes. Yes you did.

The move went more smoothly than I expected, too. Excellent. :-D

I thought when I saw arc 2 had 3 chapters I was saying to myself cool another chapter.Then I found out that you moved some chapters I said darn. Ps. Sorry if this is messy I am typing from my wii.