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It occurs to me Mewtwo isthe ideal pokemon to save Slash (if he is going to be svaed) as he is a sort of artificial Great One and has weilded life and death before, with the clones. Even if this is not how Mewtwo is used i would ask that he is used as the villains are Rocket centric and Mewtwo has more reason than most to hate Giovanni, he also is the most powerful psychic in existance making him virtually invincible except to the most powerful dark types.

oh and by the way a truly great fic and are the indetities of the legendaries mentioned in passing going to be revealed. particularly the desert one.

Slash was right about one thing, if there is a single thing wrong with the world it is people like the Jirachi worshippers, people too blinded by petty reasonless hate to open their eyes and actually see. I honestly wouldn't have been able to stop myself from verbally ripping the religion apart in those circumstances and then damn the consequences.

When are you going to update?

PS, I'm sorry about your dog :(

I've found a pic depicting a Regigigas of a size even greater to the one in Sinners.

http://disc.420chan.org/po/src/1256090011713.jpg

Hail to the King.

one thing to say, no my name isent a trubitue to slash, thoguh r.r ok well mabye it is alittle, at any rate. great up date, sad, intense. fucking awesome. it was darker then any othe chapter, yet..had abit of hope in it, its been weeks since i read it and im just now able to reply, love the story thoguh. ah. and i hope every thing gets better...life sucks..we live and..well..yeah. it just sucks. but, things get better in time. Though, as one more encourageing saying pertaining to the sotry keep it up slash. this story drives me though out most of what i do e.e i hope ill review more later on, ill sruely try, extra motavation is all youll get from me lol.

Cataclysm. The newest chapter.

I have only three words to say, Slash.

HOLY FUCKING SHIT.

And I mean that in the best way possible. This chapter fucking ROCKED.

Great chapter, though your dialogue needs a little work.

Poor Torkoal.....

Bravo! I can't really put in words how that chapter made me feel; it was great.<----- or can I?

I guess I'll just say I'm not impressed with this chapter as I could be.
It's supposed to be the huge finale, but there's just not that much meat to it. A bundle of battles, but nothing really hard-hitting. To quote Kiako, "I am growing sick of these riddles and vagaries!". Foreshadowing exposition in the middle of a fight scene is rather tiresome.

There are parts I greatly enjoyed, though, like when Torkoal used Explosion.

... I guess I'm just spoiled by series' like Dragon Ball Z and Fate/Stay Night, where I want finales to be huge and flashy.

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You know, you are now amongst my three favorite authors. That includes professional ones, those that write books for a living. This story, and this chapter... Simply mind-boggling.
There are only two reasons why I don't think you could turn this story into a book and make millions out of it.

1. Most people wouldn't think the story is... appropriate... in certain parts.

2. Pokemon is copyrighted by Nintendo.

And, well, if you were writing this for money, even if that made you write it faster, the story would be different, since your motives for writing would be different. And I don't want that.
But seriously. I usually read the stories here just for the obvious reason. I began reading yours for the same reason, but after reading the first chapters, that thought vanished from my mind, and I read more chapters for several hours without realizing the passing of time. I liked the sexual scenes, yes, but they aren't the reason why I read this. I'm moved by this story. I absolutely love it.

Simply put, I love this story, and I sincerely wish that you will continue writing.