rate_review Reviews

Very nicely done... Your Sanzo is much more belligerent and completely resistant to romance than mine, but you do write him so well, and I do love that Gojyo gets over on him that little victory in the end (which, of course, he must want or it wouldn't happen at all!) Your writing is very spare yet very eloquent at the same time, and your imagery quite vivid.

This fic was hot! but also very satisfying on other levels. The surprise of finding that the assumption of Sanzo being the one to wield the harisen was balanced by the revelation that there was no clear uke in this pairing. Sanzo's hot little ass taking the gun--what outrageous and stunningly vivid a picture that is! Very good work--hope you decide to put this dynamic duo to work in another fic!

LIKED THE STORY TO BAD IT WAS ONLY A ONESHOT...WOULD HAVE BEEN FUN TO SEE WHERE THIS WOULD LEAD*SMILES*