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January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, the altered version of the original. Nice touch so i'll give this one four out of five stars, also no errors as far as I can see. Well that's all I gotta say, like your stories though Tony, keep up the good work buddy.
Untell Then Semper Phi Carry On. (<---Blatant rip-off XD)
Untell Then Semper Phi Carry On. (<---Blatant rip-off XD)
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January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Blatant rip-off above XD*
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January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is just the Ash/Misty lemon I have been looking for. This is great. This is a very good story.
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January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, this one is a... different concept. I've never heard of a quicksand fetish before.
You do have some misspellings and bad grammar in places.
After having a near death experience, most people would not want to venture back into the area that nearly killed them. Those that do often win Darwin awards.
You say this is an early fic of yours. You seemed to have improved a bit since then, however.
You do have some misspellings and bad grammar in places.
After having a near death experience, most people would not want to venture back into the area that nearly killed them. Those that do often win Darwin awards.
You say this is an early fic of yours. You seemed to have improved a bit since then, however.