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January 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
ending made me laugh out loud; so it DID happen.
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October 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Niceee. XD
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July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it alot...it was really intense...
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January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH. MY. GOD. This was perfect! Everything was perfect! Even the ending! Nothing long and drawn out. Just as a short story should be! Great basis and wonderful preception of the characters! I give it two thumbs up and five stars! ^^ It made my inner fangirl squee!
~Xannath (le femme)
~Xannath (le femme)
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January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
brilliant story me like it a whole whole lot :D
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January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Omg that was awesome. I know it's terribly vague to say so, but... Just, everything about this story was great. Imagery, characterization, plot... Excellent work!
And I quite like the ending, no worries. Heheh. Broke the table. XD
And I quite like the ending, no worries. Heheh. Broke the table. XD
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January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ahahaha.... that was great. No matter that Light started and finished it; he still lost. XD That was great!!
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January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah haha! This is absolutely FANTASTIC!
Oh, and I liked the ending. I thought it was hilarious.
Oh, and I liked the ending. I thought it was hilarious.
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January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i liked the ending, i thought it was a good way to end it...overall it was sexy and good. you really got into Lights mind pretty well i think.
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January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is fantastic my dear. Absolutely wonderful. So wonderful, in fact, that if I have time in the near future, I may have to draw a doujin for this. If I do it, I'll be sure to let you know so you can download it. :)