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October 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
A lot of the punctuation is a bunch of little question mark things in the second chapter. You should probably fix that! But this was a very nice story (and this time I found one about characters I actually know, which is nice), sweet and cute, and of course it was very sexually enjoyable. Are Cheryl and a Gardevoir together in the anime cartoon, and you were just describing how you thought that happened, or did you come up with the idea yourself? Either way you and my bad bunny did very nice work here and I can clearly see how much you two have improved since the Misty stories.
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December 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i found this story from a pic at hentai foundry i like the picture and this story lot!
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December 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i think this is a wonderful story that has not just good sex scenes but a genuine story line. i know it might be asking alot but i would love to see this story expanded and taken further. follow them as they come accross new and interesting people and pokemon. but again i know its asking alot
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April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful, just beautiful. And sexy. I've really enjoyed what's been done so far, hope there's more in the future.
Hmm, maybe I'll read Sinners sometime, as well...
Hmm, maybe I'll read Sinners sometime, as well...
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February 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I must say that I enjoyed Garderotica much more than Sinners. Sinners was too pretentious, preachy, and "epic". You seem to have avoided that snare, thank god.
Also +1 for having a relatively realistic gardevoir (everyone seems to forget that she isn't human).
8+1/10
Also +1 for having a relatively realistic gardevoir (everyone seems to forget that she isn't human).
8+1/10
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November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, not bad! I hadn't expected any more from this. I'm really hoping you'll have more to come too, seems like you're developing this into a long term project, which is fine by me because it's really cute and hot!
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November 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story, can you have a threesome between Cheryl/Gardevoir and Norse joy (Make a sasd face)Please!
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November 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice, how about Nurse joy (With some toyx action) for the next chap.
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October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow, awesome update, love how you worked it all together like that. looking forward to more,
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June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so awesome, more gardevoir plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!