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February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh man u gotta continue this or make another like it, i love gardevor
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February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this one! It was sweet and very, very hot, which is funny because I would not ever have thought of Gardevor that way! But I'm hoping you'll continue this some day! I really liked it.
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January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was good
all ur fics r good
all ur fics r good
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January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was certainly something.
Great spelling (I don't know why I comment on spelling all the time, a simple spell check can fix about all errors), great grammer and formating (although some systems will also auto fix those). Nice description, moderate length, good output. All and all a 7 out of 10.
Untill next time, semper phi, carry on.
Great spelling (I don't know why I comment on spelling all the time, a simple spell check can fix about all errors), great grammer and formating (although some systems will also auto fix those). Nice description, moderate length, good output. All and all a 7 out of 10.
Untill next time, semper phi, carry on.
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January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was greater than 95% of all the Pokemon lemons I've been seeing around here lately.
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January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story as always. You have the greatest story ideas, they are all brilliant. And just out of curiosity, when are you going to have more chapters for your story "Poke High"? The first chapter was pure genius, and I would love to see more. Keep up the great work.
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January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow! this was sexy but also very sweet and nice! i loved it! any chance of seeing future chapters? i'd love to see cheryl and guardevoir develop their relationship, you've set it up so nicely
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January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Goddamn that was awesome! The lemon was VERY well written; I don't think I've seen a lemon that can compare to this one except for Slash's. :)
But what I really love is how you lead up to the lemon; the Beedrill nest was beautiful. I would have never thought of that...then again, I'm not very creative. Good job, and keep up the good work!
But what I really love is how you lead up to the lemon; the Beedrill nest was beautiful. I would have never thought of that...then again, I'm not very creative. Good job, and keep up the good work!