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person mls
schedule February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i'm sad to hear that your done with this story!! i hope you write more stories like this one!!!!!
person mamarita
schedule February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I almost hate to see the story end, but it was a great conclusion. DLS
person Chocho
schedule February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I thought that Yuki knew why Shuichi was always so tight? But good story. Love it.
person mls
schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!
person mls
schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
loved this chapter!!! can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!
person mamarita
schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The story is adorable. If I may give some advice, get a beta to help with the punctuation. It's a little hard to read sometimes because the sentences run together. Otherwise, I really love the story!
person RRW
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a great beginning...if you still need a Beta, I am available.
person mamarita
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for writing the sequel To Pink Candy Neko.. I loved that story and missed seeing Shuichi being reunited with Yuki. I agree that you need a beta. Some of your sentences run together and the words are badly misspelled. But the actual story is quite intriguing. I look forward to updates.

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