rate_review Reviews

Great to see a new chapter. This one was very sweet, it's nice to see them back on track. Keep it up!

i really enjoyed this chapter; it had just the right amount of sweetness and forgiving tones..... =) the mystery behind l is still very intriguing. thanks for sharing and i really look forward to the next chapter.

I'm grateful nonetheless. Thank you for the update! Um, are you alright? I hope you, your mother, and your grandmother are feeling better. Again, thank you so much for the update!

Joie,
Gloria

aww i really liked this chapter!! especially the part where watari caught them making out in the back seat lmao cant wait to what your brilliant mind come up with for the next chapter!! XD

I really liked this chapter because you were able to accurately illustrate the conflicting feelings between Raito and L, and what the two are going through at this particular moment. They both love each other and yet again, L makes the first move.

So, what's this trip again? I wouldn't have been surprised if L followed him to wherever Raito was going. I can't wait for the next chapter and remember YOU ARE AN AWESOME AUTHOR! So no depreciating.

lol, love the hearts made out of fruit. That's just too cute. I had a feeling it was L as soon as it was a black car. ^^ hope those two make up real well soon. Loving it!

Another wonderful chapter. But, wow...Battle Royale on the plane? As much as I like that film, I don't think I'd want to watch it while being stuck on a plane with a bunch of strangers XD.

Don't belittle yourself.

Anyway this chapter was amazing because it explained so much about L that previously hidden to the reader and Raito, even though we knew, in a way, what was happening. Well, actually it just explained that he's a huge pervert and very stalkerish. I felt the most sympathy for Raito because now he feels as though L doesn't love him the way he loves the other man, or maybe that there were ulterior motives behind the other's actions. Poor Raito.

I hope you feel better. *gives you some medicine* I'm glad to hear that your grandmother is feeling better as well.

I really liked the way you alliviated some of the tension I was feeling with L interpreting the "bastard" remark as he did, and the way he looked when deserting the tea.

Don't think it's a sub-standard chapter! I like that Raito got all pissed off but still stuck to keeping the ring. Also, the idea of Raito being able to tell L had been upset by him eating the inferior lollipop was both cute and clever.

And... Mysterious Room of Mystery has been revealed!!! I was really thinking 'kinky bondage room' with some of L's paintings, but 'secrety spy room' does suit him better! I'm guessing Raito won't immediately bounce back from this in a happy-bunnies way. Looking forward to more!

Also, I'm glad your grandma's doing better, but it passing to you and your mother is very, very bad. Get better! Take care!