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June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww I'm glad everything is going well. Yeah that kidney disease thing is running rampant now. I have a physical scheduled to determine that exact thing this week and I'm not looking forward to it. But this was still a good chapter despite your sub-standard label. Oh and thanks for the gaia comment glad you liked my profile. Let me know if you're on towns any time you see me online and we'll hang. Well see ya next chapter and I'm thinking of doing some avvie art for your fic so look forward to that too. Keep it up loving it.
-L
-L
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June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
just so you know red and white roses together signifie death
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June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. I just read all 19 chapters within 24 hours. And I worked and stuff. c:
Very good. I lurv it. Hope your grandma gets better.
Very good. I lurv it. Hope your grandma gets better.
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June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
^_^ Awww, the ending of chapter 19 and 18 made me fuzzy inside. Perfect WAFF. I have no clue what a car boot is but I figurd it was something that you put in your car to keep things safe, right..? I loved the scene when L was chasing the ducks, and it was kind of funny how Mikami quoted Shakespear while kidnapping Light.
Um, about your grandmother's sugar level. If she eats something salty it should go down, like Saltine Crackers. If that's not working then I suggest you get some Chloroform for yourself, knock her out, and take her to the hospital because then you have a major problem on your hands. -I would have suggested knocking her out with force, but I figured since she was your grandmother you would rather not have to use such force...-
Um, about your grandmother's sugar level. If she eats something salty it should go down, like Saltine Crackers. If that's not working then I suggest you get some Chloroform for yourself, knock her out, and take her to the hospital because then you have a major problem on your hands. -I would have suggested knocking her out with force, but I figured since she was your grandmother you would rather not have to use such force...-
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June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
^_^ Awww, the ending of chapter 19 and 18 made me fuzzy inside. Perfect WAFF. I have no clue what a car boot is but I figurd it was something that you put in your car to keep things safe, right..? I loved the scene when L was chasing the ducks, and it was kind of funny how Mikami quoted Shakespear while kidnapping Light.
Um, about your grandmother's sugar level. If she eats something salty it should go down, like Saltine Crackers. If that's not working then I suggest you get some Chloroform for yourself, knock her out, and take her to the hospital because then you have a major problem on your hands. -I would have suggested knocking her out with force, but I figured since she was your grandmother you would rather not have to use such force...-
Um, about your grandmother's sugar level. If she eats something salty it should go down, like Saltine Crackers. If that's not working then I suggest you get some Chloroform for yourself, knock her out, and take her to the hospital because then you have a major problem on your hands. -I would have suggested knocking her out with force, but I figured since she was your grandmother you would rather not have to use such force...-
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June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm new to this story and loving it. I spent half of this chapter laughing and/or giggling in my room. L's calculation of him posing going down was too funny to me for some reason. Just HAD to say it, didn't you? Thanks for working so hard on this, I really don't see too many DN fics that really make me chuckle out loud.
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June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm afraid I don't have constructive criticism to give you. I just wanted to say that I freakin love it!!!! I haven't finished it yet since I found it today, but so far, I really love it and your portrayals of the characters therein. The best part about your story is that they're in character; I'm usually turned off towards outrageously IC characters. I mean, even when you said that sometimes Light was OOC, the situations that he was put in would naturally cause him to say and do things that he usually wouldn't. I'm going to keep on reading, and keep on enjoying!
Oh! I don't know if anyone else mentioned this but....you watched the Yu-Gi-Oh Abridged Series didn't you? lol
Oh! I don't know if anyone else mentioned this but....you watched the Yu-Gi-Oh Abridged Series didn't you? lol
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June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ack! I meant outrageously OOC.
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June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope you grandmother gets better, mines in the hospital as well (getting better as time goes on...)
My loves with ya, doll, as is my hope and all that jazz... (dont mind the sentiments... very late at night...)
My loves with ya, doll, as is my hope and all that jazz... (dont mind the sentiments... very late at night...)
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June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O...M...G... You are such a genius. I can barely type this because I was so excited from your chapter. Wow! Talk about action-packed. Poor Raito. He is always being stalked, kidnapped, surrounded by stupid crazy people, or picked up by anonymous artists. XD. I love that L is always there to save him in the end, though. It's quite endearing.
L didn't kill Mikami, did he? I wouldn't blame him, and could kind of see it after what Mikami did, but it would a bit extreme to kill him. Are you going to explain what happened while Raito was in the car boot? I want to know how L found him and whatnot.
Wonderful chapter, once again, and I can't wait to see what happens in the next. I hope your Grandmother feels better. I'll pray for her. ^_^
L didn't kill Mikami, did he? I wouldn't blame him, and could kind of see it after what Mikami did, but it would a bit extreme to kill him. Are you going to explain what happened while Raito was in the car boot? I want to know how L found him and whatnot.
Wonderful chapter, once again, and I can't wait to see what happens in the next. I hope your Grandmother feels better. I'll pray for her. ^_^