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Hellagoddess!

While I appreciate the advisery warning that there might not be an update for some time, take as long as neccessary, and more, to be with your Grandmother. Family always first, and I respect that you and your family are taking her well-being so seriously. My thoughts and prayers go with you, your grandmother, and the rest of your family.

As for the update, loved it! You'd think he'd learned the first time; I wonder what, exactly, he meant by "maimed"? Is Mikami...dead?

Looking forward to more, and please, no rush. Family first.

Ohana,
Gloria

This chapter is, of course, as brilliant as your chapters seem always to be... I just wanted to tell you that I fell out of bed laughing and nearly broke my laptop when I read the line "Does this rag smell like chloroform to you?". Absolutely. Fucking. Hilarious. XDD

First of all: I hope your grandmother does better...! That's a distressing and worrying problem. Don't feel pressure to write, take care of her and yourself...!

Heheh, I'm guessing that L knew when Raito would awaken because he'd have been watching on the cameras...

As for the rest-- my brain is overwhelmed by the awesomeness! I was panicking almost as much (exagerration!) as Raito, trying to figure out what the crash and scream were-- L having someone run their car into Teru's? My first thoughts had been, "I bet the bastard put the car on a ferry, and they're taking a boat somewhere!" or "Monster truck rally...?" but that didn't really make sense.

A kidnapping! A rescue! All in one chapter. But L didnt get his lollipops... still, I liked this! It had me totally absorbed, and I was as baffled as Raito. I'm looking forward to reading the rest, whenever you can get it out. Best wishes for your grandmother!

Raito: Oh look Ducks!

L:... o.o;?

*Ducks come closer*

L: *Flails arms* Get away from my fooooood!!! *Flails arms more*

*5 minutes later*

Raito: Huh?

L: Grr... *Punch* Get away from my Raitoooooo!!!! *Punches more*

hahaha that was great! L♥ved it! Can't wait for more xD

I am not, by any stretch of the imagination, fluent in Japanese. But I did know the word koibito and actually gasped, outloud--in fact, very loudly--when Mikami said it. I was already on edge, as I'm sure L and Light were, when Mikami sat down on their blanket and preceded to touch Raito. I was so loud, in fact, that my co-workers were concerned and I had to come up with a quickly formulated and quite clever lie to sate them. I failed, fo course, and even as I'm writing this review, they're staring at me cross-eyed.

*coughs* THIS IS MY FAVORITE CHAPTER SO FAR!

I doubled over in silent laughter when L went on about "if you neccessitate sunlight we can eat by the window" thing. That was soooo funny to me. And what sold L was being able to walk around without shoes! And the duck scene! THE DUCK SCENE! This chapter was pure magic! I want more like this one!

And then L totally kicks Mikami's ass! And I thought you wrote it perfectly, by the way. Sometimes, what you don't say is more powerful. I really liked that we didn't get to hear all of what L whispered to Mikami, only Mikami's reaction to it. It made L seem twice as dangerous and lethal to me. I loved it. Came out of no where, and I loved it. Man! I can't wait for Near to wander back into the story, if this is the kind of L we're going to see when their happiness is threatened!

Joie and Peaches!
Gloria

OH MY GOD, THE DUCKS!! D:

Violent L is funny ^^
I love this story!
Please write the next chapter ASAP! :D

^3^ I've been meaning to read this for a couple weeks now, and I finally started it yesterday. It's so good! I loved the duck-chasing scene. Made me laugh. :D Can't wait for next week's chapter! Keep it up!

How dare Mikami touch Raito?! Raito belongs only to L!!!!!!! hmmm, I shall have to go punish him for that...vigorously ;)

hehehe, I just knew L was gonna chase the ducks. I do that all the time too! (yeah, people stare)

Good job as always! Please write the net chapter soon!!!!

~Amaya-chan~

muahahahahaha that was funny XD CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPPY!!!!!

*is rolling on floor laughing ass off* I love it! POSSESSIVE L IS JUST FUCKING AWESOME! It was great, I was wondering when he'd snap. Mikami... Always good for a delusional over obsessive romp...