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No need to apologize. I love the mental image of L staring at the ducks and chasing them away. It was very amusing. Thank you for updating once more.

Let me just say that I thought that was a great fight scene, and how DARE Mikami!!!! What a perve! The only pervert I idoLize is L! Mikami is just plain creepy! I loved how you played the possessive L! Way to go, I can't wait till the next chapter!

Jealous L! You are the MASTER, Hellagoddess.

I haven't reviewed in weeks and I am so sorry @______@ I've been reading, but haven't had the time to review (I get the chapter and then get off the internet. Gr.) So...

Chapter 16

Gifts?! Haha- I'm interested to see where you're going with the gifts. Even though I feel like I'm so rooted in Japanese culture, I had never heard of those chocolates. Haha. Nor had I heard of the puzzle ring... Oh, L, you possessive man...

Chapter 17

Short =( I'm sad I didn't get to see the original chapter. I did like this a lot... hmmm... a "god among men." I bet you it's Mikami! (Well, you know and I don't... haha) Jealous!L is totally legit, for the record.

Now! To read and review chapter 18 and beg for hella's forgiveness for not reviewing ;_____;

Chapter 18

Opening paragraph= love. It's the perfect example of why I am simply in love with your writing. Perfect in character imagery with a slight twinge of humor. Haha. Aaaand L is being a house mouse again. I love his response! Haha. I'm surprised L isn't all OCD about the paint spots... of course, cleanliness wasn't exactly L's obsession. As for using chess terms-- very classy. Very Death Note. =3

I can just imagine the bypassers' faces as they set sights on L's.... bounty. Haha. And-- awwww.... Raito is thinking about being with L forever... @_@ Awwww...

Duck! This scene made me beam. And ha! It IS Mikami. I feel cool for some reason >_> Hahahaa-- It's so Mikami. Worshipping Raito's every step.

Hurray! Sorry this is my first review in weeks... man, I miss being up at school ;_;
~Ame

aw! i loved this chapter! especially the part about the ducks!-- i totally cannot picture L doing that and thats what made it so dang great!! XD and hooray for love triangles! cant wait to see what happens in the next chapter! X3

Omfg. *laughing* The duck thing...! L dodging the duck. That nearly killed me. His absolute bafflement and fear was wonderful!!! I also loved how sneakily Raito convinced him to go to the park, and that putting his feet in the grass is what decided L.

Also, I'm glad Raito's able to actually get L outside sometimes...! It's amazing. And I also like that Raito's still nervous about showing their relationship in public and hasn't completely settled into domestic bliss.

*mouth actually fell open when Mikami touched Raito's thigh* That guy-- just-- woooooow. (Okay, that was a startling display of eloquence...) That shocked me! And then he calls Raito koibito! I knew L would punch him. I'd have punched him.

I still like Mikami. *laughs*

I liked this chapter muchly! It had cute parts and violence to Mikami-- I mean, violent!L. L chasing the ducks was actually, crazily, something I could picture the real L doing in this situation! He's never really had a chance for a childhood.

....O.O.....

Wow...L is HIGHLY possessive of his valuables. ^_^. I believe that this was also proven by the ring that he gives to Raito. I'm quite surprised that Matsuda and Misa haven't noticed it on his finger yet.

So, Mikami returns... and gets his behind beaten into the ground. Is he going to try and press charges? He is a lawyer... so I would think that he would try and get revenge the legal way. Not that L can't beat him in court. XD. I am very curious as to what will happen in the coming chapters.

Oh my god BEST CHAPTER EVER!! L rocks even harder now in my opinion and yes i can see him chasing ducks as I went to the park today myself in cosplay earlier and chased geese so this is kinda of a weird ironic happening that I would come back home and read a chapter about L chasing ducks...I'm actually kinda freaked out now.....;;>_>.....<_<;; am I L?....Does...does that make me L? EEPP!! In other words that was awesome and you rock so keep it up and I will keep reading it! You're reading my mind!...Or one of us is reading the other's mind...XD

-L

This was a great time to bring him back, I wonder how he will affect them later on. It's nice to see you updating regularly.

Wow. All I can say is wow. This story is so amazing, I absolutely love your style of writing and how you portray Light and L, they both seem very in character to me. I loved the thing with the ducks, it was hilarious xDD And I was so happy when Mikami got the shit beat out of him. He deserved it, the bastard ^__^ I hope that Mikami makes more reappearances soon, I quite like violent, possessive L :DD Well, keep up the great work on this story and please update soon! ^__^