rate_review Reviews

Love the story... It has put a huge smile on my face. And I have got the feeling I will be grinning like a loon all day =)

Anyway, I found your style quite pleasant to read and so far I love the way you depict the characters!! Raito being all inexperienced and having difficulties at the beginning does not sound too far off his personality in the manga (before he finds the Death Note anyway)... and it is quite cute!!! Raito is my favorite character... Ahem.

I like how you portray L as manipulating situations to his advantage... and as a real pervert at times too =) Sounds like him alright!

Now, I would say that the mysterious sender of the flowers is our loveable-but-slightly-psychotic Teru-kun. The biblical reference might have given him away. Ah, he was so disappointed not to get Raito's nude painting. I am totally sympathetic and sharing Teru's pain. I mean I would also be horribly upset if I could not get such a wonderful painting. I mean it's Raito-sama's NAKED, lucious, delectable, and did I mention NAKED body we are talking about here!!! Ahem, digressing again.

Anyway, I hope to read more of this! Keep up the great job! I am sorry not to be able to offer anything more constructive than "I love it, I love you and I can't wait for more!!" - English not being my first language at all, there is not much on which I can comment ;)

Most sincerely,
Lex

I been reading this for quite some time now and I have to say that this is one of thee best lxlight I've read so far. Please continue with the awesomeness. ^_^

I-shall-review-every-single-chappie-when-i-am-not-in-a-hurry-to-go-to-cram-school!!!!!!


So i shall rant as fast as i can. brace yourself)

THECHAPPIESWEREGREATANDSORRYIDIDNTREADTHEMSOONERTHEYWEREBRILLIANTLYMADEEVENIFTHEYWEREOC--YOUROCKMYSOCKSOFF!!!!

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gambatte on your updates!!!!!! love the sweet annivarsarry gifts--- hw u noe L was part hungarian? :D

Ooooooo! This has something to do with Mikami, doesn't it? HA! that weird perverted freak can't be held from Raito, his "God," for too long. Although, now, he will have to deal with a very possessive world-famous artist. ^_^. I have a feeling that Near shall somehow become involved while trying to ruin Raito's business as usual. XD.

This chapter was amazing. We, the readers, should be thanking you for bringing such a marvelous story into the fanfiction world. ^_^. So thank you.

I really like ur fic it is one of my favorites keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



and i m sorry to bother but i need help finding a fic do u know how i could? its abbout L being female!!! pls tell me!!!!! thanks

Wow, I didn't think I was going to like this story as much as I did. But it being L x Raito how could I resist? I love what you've got going so far, my friend put me onto this yesterday and read most of it through the night, losing precious hours of sleep; woke up and finished reading the remaining chapters. xD Soooo worth it. I loved the part with the flowers, I'm probably not alone in suspecting who exactly sent those flowers. ;D Keep up the awesome work, I'll be looking forward to your future updates. ~Lamica ♥

slain flora My goodness, I read this at work and I couldn't stop laughing!

Such a mystery! I'm looking forward to more!

Joie,
Gloria

I have a sneaky feeling as to who may have sent thatm but it's really just a hunch. Anyway, loved this chapter... it was so cute! L jealous! XD hope to see more soon!

I'm gonna guess Mikami is our mysterious rose-man? Haha, what a creeper XD I can't begin to explain how much I love this chapter! I'm an absolute sucker for L/Light fluff~ And you delivered perfectly! Jealous!L is icing on the cake :D I'll be looking forward to your next update (i get giddy when I check and see that SoM's been updated XD) and thank you for all the effort you put into writing SoM!

I don't understand why you erased that part. I didn't think it wasn't fitting...
If you have a short chapter you can always put a sex scene to make it longer :P