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Rawr. Stalker!Mikami, here we go.

OMG! I've been reading this fic since it first started but I wasn't able to review coz I'm a bit shy when it comes to reading fics in AFF and I'd like to stay anonymous as possible.. but this chapter made me want to say something about its awesomeness and cuteness that I had been compelled to review! I truly liked the subtle gestures and the not so direct way you made L jealous.. you depicted him wonderfully. I also liked the other chapters and Raito's nude pics... I hope that you would elaborate on some of L's fantasy paintings of nude Raito and positions.. you describe them so wonderfully that I can easily picture it on my mind.. Keep it up! XD I love it!

Aw, this one was short. I am interested in the flowers you are planning something here. Glad to see more, but hopefully longer chapters are to come.

I am not too big of a fan of jealous!L but you made it work & I loved it. <3

Heheh, the current chapter so far was pure gold.

I was surprised to read how crude Near could be... it actually seemed like something that Mello himself would do more than Near. Hmm....

and the roses... gee, I wonder who those could be from? ;) (so obvious, but I still liked that part anyway. That dude doesn't just get enough attention in fandom).

Jealous L was so adorable to see too. =)

That was just too cut (this last chapter about the flowers.) Also is there really a book titled The Language of Flowers? I feel that I've heard that said somewhere before. Thank for updating once more, please do so so again at your convenience.

I forgot to reply! Read this a few hours ago, but my head is not clear or coherent right now, I've been sick all day... but this makes me feel slightly better! I want to read the deleted/moved scene though...! Jealous!L is just about the cutest idea ever, and I loved how happy Raito was about the flowers. (I'm assuming they're from Mikami, because if it was Near or something-- that's a strange idea. I'm not sure he has enough emotions to send someone flowers! Mikami is certainly crazy enough though.) L's childishness at the end was also very adorable.

Hheheh good one. L jealous is just too cute especially if you place him in chibi mode. Hmm I may just draw that for you. Anyway keep it up it's going great!See you next chapter.

-L

MMMMmmmhhhh....Me thinks Mikami Teeru is the Other bidder who fought so ferousciously for the nude painting of Raito-kun earlier and has now taken on the stalker persona that suits him so very well..Heeheee things just got more interesting...And L being Jealous is absolutely adorable...The little eccentric doesn't know he's jalous and doesn't know how obvious it was when he became that way...Which is what makes it so cute...So good builder and connector leading into a good arch or plot line...I just hope since niether of them are detectives in this one but still retain there god like intelligence they should be able to survive this episode hopefully 'cause Stalkers get violent very quickly when they image of the person they stalk is tarnished in anyway....So yeah like the way the stories going ^_^

I love the story! Raito and L are so cute it's awesome. Sometimes it's nice to just have WAFF stories rather than a lot of drama or angst. Can't wait for the next chapter!