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No, I'd say Raito still need juicing. ^_~

Great chapters! Keep up the good work!

You have to continue this! I want to see what L does to Mikami when he figures out Mikami was the rat! Not only that but I just KNOW the two of the mare going to get back together. I wonder What L did to Near for splitting them up if he broke Mikami's fingers JUST for touching Raito....This is getting gooooooooooooooood.

D= Want another chapter! Want now!
It's been so long, I'm aching to not have another update. Dx This story has everything that a yaoi fan/romantic/artist like myself wants and needs! Don't stop! Please!

Okay, I'm going to be honest here. I have avoided reading this story thus far because the summary seemed silly to me at first glance. It never really got my attention, and only after finding nothing else to read, did I decide to give SoM a try. And, I realise now, what a BIG mistake I made. ^-^

This entire fic has been AWESOME. I've been reading over the past few days, and it only took so long because I had to go to work and college between readings. Even then, I was thinking about it too! I know it's a good fic when I can't stop thinking abvout it! It's been amazing all the way through, and I simple can't wait until you get all the parts of your computer back so that you can write MORE! I'm crossing my fingers for you!

"The Apple no longer needs to be juiced. Repeat, no juicing is needed." Pfft, PRICELESS.

Holy hell I love this fan fic.
I can relate to both Raito and L
Oh and I had a custom Dairy Queen cake with
Raito and L kissing and L had Raitio's shirt half way off :P

no update this week?

To sound like a total fangirl, I just spontaneously combusted from the hotness. I was planning on reviewing later in the story, but I just had to stop and congratulate you on an amazingly well-written and tastefully hot lemon. It was sexy and elegant... and just... guh. I can't even really convey to you in words how nice that was.

You write very beautifully too, it's quite pleasant to read! I'm enjoying this little story thoroughly, and I will be keeping up with it.

I still have fifteen chapters or so to read, but I have work to do right now, and thus will be reading and reviewing a bit later. Thank you for posting this work, though! Wonderful, truly wonderful.

It'd be nice if I could go to a con, though I don't know who I'd cosplay as. Happy for the update though! :D Hope to read more soon.

Misa and Matsuda acting that helpful and protective is actually really endearing...! *laughing* And the wink-nudge to the headsets and alarm belts was great.

Omg-- I read the next line, where Misa was talking into a giant purple box with sparkly antenna, and nearly choked on my milkshake! I forgot I'm not supposed to drink while reading...!

...*laughs again* When L showed up next to Raito, I realized I'd actually leaned forward and widened my eyes and started biting on one of my fingers.

*actually choked on louder laughter at poor Raito having to say 'red apple to orange'*

Yay, they're talking again! *still dreading this ending* I'll be saaaaad. The whole ending to this chapter had me trying not to crack up though, wonderful! And I keep wondering what was going through L's head when that happened.

Damn. I wish I hadn't waited so long to read this chapter. I confess I put it off because I was afraid that there would be more fear and angst and I wanted to put that off until I might have some resolution. However, I crumbled and now I'm glad I did. :D
I particularly like Matsuda's codes. XD
Very nicely done as always.
BTW I checked out your pics. I covet your L and Light num-nums. That includes the one of L and fruit?.
Thanks, Ronnie.