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May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
First time reading this fanfic I have to say it very well done.
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May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very well done. I look forward to your next chapter.
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April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 14 - So, you said to review and here I am! Reviewing! Anyway, I liked this chapter a lot. I think you did a good job showing how Raito felt inexperienced and slightly weak. ^^ And I also like how you flaunted his personality throughout it. With him finding that little bit of 'control', and basically abusing it. xD Great job! And update soon!
- Tryst
- Tryst
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April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
dear...jesus. This is a REALLY good fic. It's humorous and adorable. I've been following your story for quite some time. Although I must admit I forget to review most of the time. heh heh I remember when I found it, it only had three chapters. I'm happy to see it has come along nicely. Keep writing, yes?
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April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it is lovely~ thank you very much for sharing ^-^
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April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wah! kawaii! i like it...on the whole it's just very...cute.
i love your characterization of L, do you think we could get a pov of him sometime? all of it so far has been very Raito-centric...
i love your characterization of L, do you think we could get a pov of him sometime? all of it so far has been very Raito-centric...
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April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh this chapter was so bloody good.
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April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hot and accurate. lol. My only suggestion is that you maybe have some mutual masturbation first the next time Raito gets too nervous, since there really should have been some of that in this chapter.
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April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow... like, serious wow. My mine is still blown so I'll have to write this review without it. I usually don't review stories (I know, I'm lazy, sorry) but after a chapter like that! I just absolutely loved how you made Raito nervous about losing his manliness and totally ignorant on man-love XD I'm glad to hear that there'll be lots more and I'm quite positive I'll stick around for it :) Thanks for the update
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April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well all the trouble you went through writing this chapter payed off, even if you still don't like it. It was very good. Keep up the good work, can't wait for the next chapter.