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.........0_0....... oh.... wow.... that was hot.... very... *is rolling around in yaoi bliss*

-Cheers- Finally! Light and L are together~ Have I mentioned just how much I love your story? Please don't drop it, ever.

The fourteenth chapter was just fine, so don't worry about it. ^^ I swear it is, because you kept the characters in character so well. I was really surprised when I saw that you hadn't created another Death Note fanfic prior to this, at least not on this site. I like your writting style and how you incorperated Ryuk and Rem into this as well, that was genius. ^^ -Please don't kill L. T^T He's too adorable to die, especially after having seen Episode 25.....-

I like how you had Raito reacting. matched his personality very well. I'm loving this story so far. ^^

kay I was one, who never review but I love this story with all my heart, sorry, you can blame my lazyness.
I really liked the chapter, I though L will be a little more dominant, but I liked how it went, I like ryuu teasing raito, is always so much fun.

you know I never like the things I do, ever, so I understand that of rwading over and over and never be okay with it, but for other people is always great what you do.

So, the story is very, wait moreeee than veryyy okay, hope you update soon ^^ I really want to get to the plot, cause I was thinkin all the time, is a nice love story, well things between L and raito are not much fluff, so it'll be great when more action comes.

I really hope the story turn out to be veryyy long, I love long stories, I swear i never stop reading.

So take care, and keep going, with another loong chapter XD bye!

The noise I made because of this cliffhanger made my mom look at me oddly. It's great so far (except for the cliffhanger). Update this ASAP. Also *throws object*

GYAAAAAAAA hot, simply hot.... but a sucky place to stop, I cry.

First? *typing is difficult right now, keeps retyping words* I'm jittery and excited! Reading shirtless!L for some reason made all the hairs on my arms stand up and my skin tingle. That is weird. I loved the description! I had to argue with myself three times not to abandon the chapter immediately and draw the scene. Because I didn't want to stop reading. *laughs*

Second-- and I'm halfway through typing this, decided to keep notes to keep my brain on track-- L saying "I have quite the sexual prowess" made me have to bite my hand to keep from snickering madly and waking Daryn up! I can so picture L doing that-- saying something like that blandly, flat-out. "Actually, Raito-kun, I am excellent at sex. Are you going to finish that cake?" *still laughing*

“Perhaps it is not me who causes the feeling personally, but a carrier agent instead. Is it that I am a man, Raito-kun? Is that tiny detail what is causing you to fuss, like an indecisive child?”

I loved that line too! L taking Raito's choice in words, turning it against him, then beating him over the head with it by means of clever wordplay...

Signed up for a forum ID thingy and awaiting a response, will check that out. I'm excited about the next chapter!!! I wouldn't have killed you for taking two weeks, but with my sense of time two weeks feels like two months, so I'd have mourned. And looked helpless. And made a lot of confused questioning noises while my brain short-circuited at the cliffhanger of death. Anyway! Oh yes, there will be fanart. ^_^

Thank goodness you've updated. I was salivating! I was kind of hoping Raito would be more in control, more in character, but your way seems to be working. It makes him vulnerable. Interesting take.

WAH~! Finally! Sex! Well... next chapter. Heh. I finally got some free time and I'm barely with it... I just wanted to read this before I went to sleep. Very amusing again-- I love you and will try to come back and leave a more coherent comment later =3
~Ame

I hereby dub thee King of Leaving me Fucking Hanging. XDD
You're worse than my significant other. T_T

Every time I come here I leave thinking "What? Seriously? But... I... Moooooooooooore..." Although... in this case, I guess that's not all that bad.