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for Shades of Mystification

by Hellagoddess

person Kuromei
schedule April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woo hoo! Raito gets to be schooled in the art o' lurrrrve~! XD *perches in chair and waits for next update* 83
schedule April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
gah!! noooooo! such a great chapter!! i loved that part with L and no shirt! X3 *sighs what a greatmental image-- please update soon!! luv ya!!
person Tulip32
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ALRIGHT!! I simply loved this chapter!! And, yes, I probably would have threatened you, maybe not with death, but certainly with something..... I'll have to think of something good enough first. Maybe I'll sic Ryuk on you. XD. Raito is so cute! He wants to "break up" with L just because he's scared but, like always, L gets what L wants. =)

You know, reading your one chapter per week makes my week. I look forward to it every weekend. Especially since I have been particularly stressed lately. Its kind of sad but I don't care. ^_^. I can't wait for the next chapter!
person Kaiyuke
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You're right about that.
*makes a death threat/flame/projectile ready just in case you decide to randomly run off without telling us*
XD

I find it difficult to picture Light acting like such a girl actually. O__O
The innocent Light would act sweet but he was always very certain of himself. He'd be shocked for a moment but he'd be able to gather his wits very quickly. Hrm. IDK. And L - haha, painfully straight forward, you've got to love him. :3
person Dotowe
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Equating Light to a sacrificial lamb was delicious! Loved this chapter and most eagerly awaiting the next one.

Joie,
Gloria
person ethere
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lovely chapter. Will happily await more. :)
person Riven Liether
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
When I first saw L offering syrup, I started thinking naughty things about waffles and Raito-kun... Hehehe

Great work, can't wait to read more~! ^_^
person oztan
schedule April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is good. I wonder if Raito will kiss another man to see if has feeling for L or because he just like getting kissed by other men.
person Saka
schedule April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*laughs* Raito's learning more and more about himself with each chapter. Things he never knew even.

Yay, I loved this chapter! Adored it actually. And I can't wait to read more. Update soon!!
person Lina
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LMAO, great job with the tentacle part. Aww, I loved this chapter :3

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