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April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol L's so sly-- it was so cute that he made Raito breakfast-- and that he didnt really even know how to make it! XD that made me smile-- please update as soon as you can- i'll be waiting X3
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April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was very satisfied with this chapter and I'm loving that you made the chapters longer. =). Its more for the readers to look forward to. I can't wait to see what happens next chapter. I do have a question though. Did L put cameras in Raito's office and home?
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April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol. i think raito is a little ooc here. he would have to have been pretty dumb not to realize that ryuuzaki and L were the same person after seeing the room full of art, and he would never faint like that. however, it's still a very cute and interesting story, and i think your portrayal of L is great.
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April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yatta! Having no life on my days off pays off! I got a chapter almost done and for some reason felt a need to check the site like... once an hour to see if anyone would post something interesting. *eyes wide* Really, that's so pathetic I feel sad! Or I would if this chapter hadn't made me grin so widely.
First! Raito being in denial about fainting because only girls faint is classic! I loved that. And... oh dear... Even the thought of L with tentacles and Raito's "he knew what would have followed..." thing... I burst out laughing and hit my leg. Laughter is violent with me sometimes. Then I reread that part three times because the idea of L suddenly sprouting tentacles and ravishing Raito is one of the strangest thoughts I've ever thunk. Anyway~! I love the humor in this chapter. It felt like he was getting a little bit giddy and panicking in his thoughts and so odd memories and thoughts were derailing him constantly. I loved that, it made him seem quite unbalanced. (And not just because of a tumor!) And him even sympathizing with Matsuda was adorable.
Why were his pants missing?!?! I mean, a reason that L would actually explain. I kept thinking that. I'd read, then stop and think, "Why isn't he wearing pants? Damn Raito being all polite and eating the delicious food (not because he's hungry, just polite, of course) ask why your pants are missing! Find some way, it's an important and practical question!" then I'd get distracted actually reading again. I love L. He takes advantage of every opportunity he can get... he'd probably defend himself by saying the fact that he left Raito's shirt on is an equally valid observation and just as unusual.
Also I'm wondering if L installed cameras in Raito's apartment too... oh my. That man and his voyeurism...
I'm very glad you liked the pics! A doujinshi would be loooovely to see. Thank you for posting early! I can sleep now, reading fix satiated.
First! Raito being in denial about fainting because only girls faint is classic! I loved that. And... oh dear... Even the thought of L with tentacles and Raito's "he knew what would have followed..." thing... I burst out laughing and hit my leg. Laughter is violent with me sometimes. Then I reread that part three times because the idea of L suddenly sprouting tentacles and ravishing Raito is one of the strangest thoughts I've ever thunk. Anyway~! I love the humor in this chapter. It felt like he was getting a little bit giddy and panicking in his thoughts and so odd memories and thoughts were derailing him constantly. I loved that, it made him seem quite unbalanced. (And not just because of a tumor!) And him even sympathizing with Matsuda was adorable.
Why were his pants missing?!?! I mean, a reason that L would actually explain. I kept thinking that. I'd read, then stop and think, "Why isn't he wearing pants? Damn Raito being all polite and eating the delicious food (not because he's hungry, just polite, of course) ask why your pants are missing! Find some way, it's an important and practical question!" then I'd get distracted actually reading again. I love L. He takes advantage of every opportunity he can get... he'd probably defend himself by saying the fact that he left Raito's shirt on is an equally valid observation and just as unusual.
Also I'm wondering if L installed cameras in Raito's apartment too... oh my. That man and his voyeurism...
I'm very glad you liked the pics! A doujinshi would be loooovely to see. Thank you for posting early! I can sleep now, reading fix satiated.
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April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Goodness, Raito, you wake up without your freakin' pants and all you can do is think about how good that kiss was and... FOOD.
*grins*
Tumour indeedy.
Hee hee hee.
*grins*
Tumour indeedy.
Hee hee hee.
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April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol XD Raito won't admit he fainted. X3 And the poor thing's thinking about it all way too much. He doesn't know how to go with the flow, does he?
Well, L will teach him eventually. ;3
Well, L will teach him eventually. ;3
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April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow ~ I really enjoy this fic.
It's really funny in some places with half of the things you make L say. It's a shame this thing doesn't have a rating button {that I can find if there is one}.
Now all I have to get used to is people calling Light Raito. I much prefer Light XD
Keep up the good work :)
It's really funny in some places with half of the things you make L say. It's a shame this thing doesn't have a rating button {that I can find if there is one}.
Now all I have to get used to is people calling Light Raito. I much prefer Light XD
Keep up the good work :)
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April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So happy to see another chapter. I am now obessed with this story!
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April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness! Early update?! You do not know how stoked I was to see that this was updated so soon =3 Hurray! Hurray! Mmmm... it was really nice to see the longer chapter, too. Although, the other ones were just the right length for teasing. Hehe. This chapter was... wow ^^;; L and Raito... so cute! I love your scene where Raito is getting on the lift especially.
'“It seems some components of Raito-kun are in the process of making that decision for him.”' XD Yeeeah. Now L has a better idea of what that painting should look like. Pervert probably already had snuck a peek =p But, who's to blame him?
Duomi's picture is so cool =^^= Thanks for sharing~<3
-Ame
'“It seems some components of Raito-kun are in the process of making that decision for him.”' XD Yeeeah. Now L has a better idea of what that painting should look like. Pervert probably already had snuck a peek =p But, who's to blame him?
Duomi's picture is so cool =^^= Thanks for sharing~<3
-Ame
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April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
http://goblinfruit.deviantart.com/art/Shades-of-Mystification-82068618
For you. ;0
I am anxious to see how their relationship develops. I also love the contrast in their personalities, which was enjoyable in the series as well. Light's inner monologue to himself is hilarious as well~ Instead of writing my opening statement for our mock trial, i was reading SoM and Light's comment about "Not being gay because of ___, ___, and ___. He was even thinking about getting a cat," made me laugh SO hard. His tumor theory was equally amusing~
I've loved this so far, and hope to read more in the future! ♥
For you. ;0
I am anxious to see how their relationship develops. I also love the contrast in their personalities, which was enjoyable in the series as well. Light's inner monologue to himself is hilarious as well~ Instead of writing my opening statement for our mock trial, i was reading SoM and Light's comment about "Not being gay because of ___, ___, and ___. He was even thinking about getting a cat," made me laugh SO hard. His tumor theory was equally amusing~
I've loved this so far, and hope to read more in the future! ♥