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Aww I saw the video and loved it!

But this chapter- L IS SO CAUGHT! Poor L though I mean that's like one of those times ya just wanna take back and everything.

But Raito is probably super confused right now, hehe. This should make for anawesome chapter. Update soon again.

GOSH! I LOVE YOUR STORY~!!! ^^ it's so cute! :D

:D aww, this is true foreplay, a la jane austen (hope you don't hate jane lol).
But RaitoxL seriously owns darcy and 'beth any day XD at least the way you write it. what can I say? sorry I didn't review earlier XD and the setting is thoroughly amusing--now that you've done it, it's so wunderbar natural that I'm wondering hmm...why didn't anyone think of this before XDD

keep up the whoohoo super work!

Poor, poor, ignorant Raito. *shakes head* They're not all that way. Guess he'll be finding that out soon enough. ;)

Well, of COURSE L was watching Raito in the shower. He's a total voyeur. You can't be a fan of Death Note and not know that. XD~

Awesome story, btw. I'm only sad that I didn't see this from the start, but I'm glad that I got to read everything up to this point in one sitting. Can't wait for more. ^^

Hiii! I'm too hyper right now. My little email thing popped up saying someone reviewed, but when I went to the site I saw you'd updated and was immediately happy and hyper (I'd been expecting a wait until Tuesday, so was keeping my hopes realistic) and then when I opened your fic another review popped up, and I thought, "I'll bet that's Hella," and it was. ::grins:: So hello! I'll definitely stop by your lj to say hi after I actually stop babbling about nothing and review.

Things relevant to the actual review: Again, way too happy that you just updated. You don't need to stuff it with words, you write well! I was disappointed that we skipped to Raito being away from L again and not what'd happenn after the shower, but he called at the end so we're good. (The 'something very interesting' at the end of chapter eight made me think, 'oh dear, if Raito presses too hard and finds out what L was really seeing, he'll break the laptop...!') Also, I previously forgot to mention I think that I love the idea of Near being a rival art dealer and that Raito calls him by his real name, and Nate has Mello and Matt as henchmen. Brilliant. (If I mentioned it before, it deserves another mention, I love it!) Raito's blatant self-denial amuses me as well, and his ridiculous thoughts on what he'd have to do if he does, in fact, turn out to be gay. Silly man...

Also! You mentioned me again! ::fangirls on you:: I have a special treat for you a few chaps from now in Tear You Apart. ::grins::

Couldn't you merge some of the shorter chapters together? D:
*is dying - WANTS TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT* <___<

Well, apart from the fact that I really want to find out what happens next in your story, these shorter chapters offer very little plot development and substance in general. I mean, ok, so during this chapter, Raito basically pondered about his sexuality found himself rather engaged by L. But really, what would have been wrong with tacking on the next part of the story? XD I'm sure you've planned some perfectly cliff-hangerish kind of ending for the next one too. :P
(Right, nevermind me, I just really want more... maybe you can update twice a week instead of once :D)
haha

Haha- no problem! I hope people go read it like I do. I now wait pretty patiently, albeit, excitedly. I know it's coming on either Monday or Tuesday and that makes those days exciting for me...And you're so awesome! You save all your review emails? Aw. ^^
This chapter was, again, clever and over all awesome. I loved Light's thoughts and how you presented them-- especially his bad notion of gays turning into his guilt for some of those stereotypes and then into a fantasy about L. Hahahaha. Very funny. I was half afraid he was going to arrive at work, only to get a call from L saying "Display these instead!" ..."These" being perfect renditions of him in the shower. =p
Looking forward to next week!
~Ame

I just started to read ur story yesterday. I have never been attracted by it before, thinking that it might be totally out of the subject. I have been really wrong!! Of course it doesn't follow the Death Note, it's simply one original story with some characters things borrowed to Death Note. It's really an awesome story, I really loved it and read all in one afternoon! Don't think stopping it!

mEH. Thats so mean! so short (cries in a corner) Ah well, just gotta wait for the next one right? Heh Matsuda really is the type to cause an accident.

Ooodles and noodles

Zannie