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August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Haha! "The apple no longer needs to be juiced." That was awesome, especially because Light is saying this in fron tof L. Perfect.
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August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That juice bit at the end was hilarious.
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August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*le gasp* you are truly evil. giving me a taste of raitoxL togetherness, then ripping it away.... T.T cant wait for the next chapter!!
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August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH I laughed so much in this chapter. Knew the performer was L in the last chapter, but it still made me very happy to read it now. And Mikami is definitely Near's informer about Light's relationship with L. But now I'm curious as to how L has taken care of it. I get really excited when I see you've updated this. It's an excellent story. Please keep the chapters coming.
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August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
.....hahahahah I have walkie talkies at work.....
*snickers* I don't live in NZ Sorry -.- Only the crappy USA! heheh......sniff....
I liked most of this and didn't dislike none of this :B Matsuda is just always a riot in these stories...but I know that L kun doesn't know about Nate or the whole blackmail at all really....it's sad though because raito really liked L
*snickers* I don't live in NZ Sorry -.- Only the crappy USA! heheh......sniff....
I liked most of this and didn't dislike none of this :B Matsuda is just always a riot in these stories...but I know that L kun doesn't know about Nate or the whole blackmail at all really....it's sad though because raito really liked L
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August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love that no matter what's happening... there's almost always a splash of humor. "No juicing is needed." XDD
I think that's what hooks me on your writing. The amusement makes it easier for me to hold out while waiting eagerly for the next update.
I think that's what hooks me on your writing. The amusement makes it easier for me to hold out while waiting eagerly for the next update.
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August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dear me, poor Raito having such an embarrassing message to deliver to his protectors! A bottle of juice has arrived? XD
I wonder what L has done? Probably killed them all. And good riddance :)
I was too traumatized by the last couple of chapters to review at all - which is not to say that I didn't think they were excellent, but just couldn't think what to say about them. Great writing and hopefully they'll get back together at last :)
I wonder what L has done? Probably killed them all. And good riddance :)
I was too traumatized by the last couple of chapters to review at all - which is not to say that I didn't think they were excellent, but just couldn't think what to say about them. Great writing and hopefully they'll get back together at last :)
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August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i swear to god this story will be the death of me. the wait between chapters is excruciating but at least they're somewhat regular. i actually thought it would be someone else performing at the concert so i was a surprised as Raito-kun to see L. and the red apple codename had me laughing. not sure if i ever left a review but i've reading since about chapter 8. i'm enthralled by this fic.
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow..I realize now that it has been a long time since I've reviewed your story, I feel like an idiot. I've been here since the beginning, you've come a long way.
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, they met again. The apple to orange part was really funny. Can't wait for the next chapter. I really love this story.