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March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah! You can't leave it there! I hope you continue soon... it's so good!
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March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HEY THAT SUCKS!!!!!!!!!!!! TO END IN SUCH A WAY*pouts* LOVE THE STORY CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE*smiles*
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March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you know, I can think of at least 4 good reasons I wouldn't have sold those paintings if I were Raito:
1) I would find it disturbing to think people would want giant paintings of me in their living room. Especially giant NUDE paintings of me.
2) It would strike me as somewhat arrogant to sell paintings of myself in my own gallery. Like, yeah, I know I'm hot, wanna picture?
3) I would find it creepy, obsessive, and slightly stalkerish that a guy I met for like 20 minutes to an hour could and would paint an entire line of pantings in that much detail and intamacy, and then give them to me to sell to the general public. EWWW!!!
4) It's sort oflike selling your body, so wouldn't that make me a prostitute?
But I'm not Raito, so he wouldn't be able to come up with such reasons, especially while flustered. Update soon!
1) I would find it disturbing to think people would want giant paintings of me in their living room. Especially giant NUDE paintings of me.
2) It would strike me as somewhat arrogant to sell paintings of myself in my own gallery. Like, yeah, I know I'm hot, wanna picture?
3) I would find it creepy, obsessive, and slightly stalkerish that a guy I met for like 20 minutes to an hour could and would paint an entire line of pantings in that much detail and intamacy, and then give them to me to sell to the general public. EWWW!!!
4) It's sort oflike selling your body, so wouldn't that make me a prostitute?
But I'm not Raito, so he wouldn't be able to come up with such reasons, especially while flustered. Update soon!
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March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i'm usually not a fan of AUs in Death Note but this one is fantastic! I love how true everyone still is! :) keep up the amazing work!
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March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
D'aww this story is so perfect! I love your portrayal of the characters (even the OOC-ish parts :D) and L is so perfect in this chapter. I'm diggin' the slight pervertedness. I really can't wait for more! <3
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March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Probably from lack of L yes he's my favorite character...Anyway love the way the stories going good stuff :)
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March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hello!
I really love your story!! it's so amazing
raito is so cute when he's frustrate! lol and L OMG he's more candid than ever, poor raito. I love them
and L an artist it's a amazing idea, and the paint with raito as model was so fun, lol
see you soon and good luck
bye
I really love your story!! it's so amazing
raito is so cute when he's frustrate! lol and L OMG he's more candid than ever, poor raito. I love them
and L an artist it's a amazing idea, and the paint with raito as model was so fun, lol
see you soon and good luck
bye
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March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HAHA! They got to hang out together for a while! And now Raito is gonna shower at L's place. HEHE! How fun that must be for him. Anyways I so can't wait to see what's gonna happen next with the two of them, update soon!
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March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am Very interested in finding out what Happens
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March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great story. your version of light seems real.