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Oh dear. poor Light.... hahahaha.

Lol interesting and without obvious grammer or spelling errors, all in all a good read so far, look forward to more :)

No Raito! Don't! I'm 94% sure L has cameras in the bathroom. He should have just agreed to the new pants... L is such a pervert, and to think he was accusing Raito of being sexually frustrated.

You're such a tease!
I like how naturally they behave around each other.... and I'm so glad he took up L's offer of a shower. I'll practically be counting the seconds since your next update. XD

WAH! What a way to end the chapter! *pout* Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful! (As usual) I look forward to next week's update!

SWEET!!!! I love this! Man, the last time I saw this story, you only had two chapters up. heh heh that was a while ago, and I'm so happy, with the chapter thus far! *bounces on the spot* I especially loved how L used Raito as a subject for his paintings and the just now with what I guess was an attempted kiss. God....it's good. I can't wait for more!!

Hello again. It is kind of you to update as regularly as you do! Thanks for making the commitment to see this story through to the end. It's delightful. On FF.net, presently there is another story similar in that L is an art teacher and well-known artist simultaneously with Light. It however focuses on Mello and Near's relationship. Light and L are just friends, but their quirky qualities shine through. You have managed the same feat here. While a little more OOC, the essence of their personalities, such as Light's need for control and L's need for pushing people to the limit just makes me laugh. Despite being a huge fan of the Manga, there are times when I like my fandom fic a tad less angsty and a little more fun. You have managed to not only infuse the story with humor but also, develop a sweet, romantic beginning for the two most obsessive, pig-headed geniuses in DeathNote :)

This is just the funnest, cutest story ever! I love all the little touches you sneak in, like the apple stress relief ball. And oooo, tricksy L! And Light still has that stick firmly wedged in his posterior! LOL I truly think this is one of the few stories I've read for Death Note that doesn't make me hate Light, or at least remember that I hate him. This is just so much fun!

And a shiver goes down my spine. Please. Please don't tell me L has cameras there, in the bathroom, in the shower. Or worse a peep hole. Oh god, I can somehow picture L's next paintings being of naked, wet, showering Raito. Gak. You know I'm normally all for LxRaito (L seme and Raito uke) but in this story, with the way you have them.... I'm not sure I support it. On another note it was really cool that you included Mikami, Nate, Matt, Mello and Ryuk! It's awesome that Raito has a rival in Nate. I hope to see more about it of them in future chapters. Yet I was unclear about the whole Ryuk and Rem thing. Are they friends of Raito? But I thought he didn't have friends. Hmm.
P.S. I did notice the little paragraph you had on the plaques by the painting. It was... yeah okay.

Oh wow! I just got finish reading all seven chapter your story is so awesome! keep up the good work :)
This chappie is awesome hehehe I kind of feel bad for Raito oh well...