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You did an excellent job in this chapter, as well as the previous one chapter 6. I'm glad that you incorporate other key Death Note characters into ch 6 because it just really seemed to fit well and it made the fic more authentic to the fandom. If you could, please put some more Mikami in the story, I find he always tends to spice a Death Note fanfiction up. Thank you for posting, and please update when you can.

Woohoo, camera time! I love hidden pervy L.

ooooooooo..... Light in a shower alone with L in the building... hmm, sounds very much like a trap to me. lol, wonder if L just steals his clothes. XD can't wait to see where this is going... love it!!!

This chapter was adorable!! I swear L always manages to win fights when it comes between himself and Raito. ^_^. I'm glad that you included that in this chapter. They almost kissed! Yey! I do wonder what L is up to though. L is never innocent when it comes to Raito. ^_^. He always has some sort of ulterior motive.

But now it's a cliffhanger! NO!! I have to wait a week. -cries pitifully- Oh well, it's worth it to read more in just a week's time.

Loved how L is so open with Raito, but when will he reveal that he is Ryuuzaki? Wonderful chapter as always!

Update soon!

~Kitsune55

Hello... just wanted to say what delightful depictions, L and Light are in this story! L practically perfect in his unusual, anti-social behaviors driving Light to second guess his sexuality and anal tendencies all in one fell swoop. What a feat? Neither do I mind the AU of this story. It's a wonderful setting for the characters to remain true to their natures in DeathNote but lighten up some and have a little fun :) Fun, no, as in L teasing Light into being his model, muse, dare I say it, boyfriend! Lovely. Thanks for sharing.

This story is simply adorable. I have been following it for some time now and have been reviewing under another name, but I can't help and praise you for each chapter. I love it! The flow, the details, the characters, all of it is simply marvelous and makes me wonder if you have authored a book yet.

Raito is refreshing in this story and it makes for a good feeling all around. He is able to communicate that he doesn't have a challenge without being a psychotic killer of the human race as we know it. L is just as huggable as in the manga and anime and doesn't seem to have changed very much. I do wish that the chapters were a big longer, so as to enjoy a bit more before your next weekly update, but the choice is yours to make. ^_^. I look forward to your next chapter. =)

Great story! -Applaudes- I'd started to read it earlier, I think when there was but two chapters left, sadly my computer died shortly after getting half-waythrough chapter two. It's taken me some time to get it back online... So, here's your review!

I loved the first conversation between Light and L after Light had visited L to pick up the paintings. It was a wonderful conversation, though I must tell you. Anytime L gave a percentage in the Anime/Manga that was low, say under 10%, it was really closer to and abover 90%. -A friend of mine who belongs to a site, don't know what it's called but it has direct contact with the creator of Death Note, told me this...-

Either way, the paintings were genius! I had an inkling as to what they may be about since L had painted them so soon after Light's appearance, he was all ready making the paint for it when Light left, I can tell. ^_^ Perhaps it was the paint he was making when Light walked in..?

Anyway, I loved the part with the nude painting of Light and how you portrayed Mikami with it. That was Eber, right? -Going off of the Manga spelling- Are you going to include Weddy..?

Hi again,
Heck, I like how it's developing. Really, the art of Raito - expected yet still a surprise (I don't even understand what I'm saying myself)
The point is, please update soon ^^

Wonderful! I just discovered this story and I love it! I don't think your Raito is OOC, after all, this is a new situation and he has very little reason to be manipulating and sadistic. I love the way you've fit some of the other characters in as well. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Your Mikami was just perfect!
I love how you're working the other characters into the story. They all seem to fit so naturally in their new roles.