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Great developmental chapter =) I look forward to reading the next and seeing how the story progresses! It always brightens my day to see that a chapter of this has been posted! As for reviewer responses, I'd rather you take the time to write the story =) I know you appreciate everything people have to say, but unless the mood strikes you, don't make yourself.
~Ame

Lovely lovely chapter. I love how Raito almost backed out of going to the showing. ^_^. He is a prideful one though. I kind of wish that L had been even more in the story than just as his codename Ryuuzaki. He is so adorable with his meeting with Raito, even if its over the phone.

I also like how you placed Near as Raito's competition between art galleries. L's art is so good that Near wants it for himself. I don't really like Near in this story already. As for Raito, I don't think that he is OOC at all. He is simply the adorable guy that isn't mad with power. =)He's better that way.

I actually think that its quite creepy that Mikami wanted to buy that painting so badly. I wonder if he's going to become a more prominent character. You know, try to steal Raito away from L and all. Though L will never let that happen. =P Update soon!

~Kitsune55

Yes! You updated earlier! I have been dying to read something and came to the site hoping that you did updated although it was before the time, and you did! That made me very happy!
L puts red color in the painted Raito's hair hehe Jee I wonder why :P I guess that the blond guy was Aiber? Saying that Light is horrendously (or any other) OOC is simply wrong. In my opinion it's the exact opposite, I was always surprised at how IC you kept him.

Ohh awesome chapter! It's so cool that everyone wanted the pictures of him- though Mikami was a lil freaky how high he was willing to go. Hehe If I had been Raito I woulda been like- yeah... Great...

Also I so don't think he's OOC at all, I mean from what I saw with him without the death note- he's totally in. And I think it's really refreshing to read him like this.

Hmm the American- I can't say for sure. But I can't wait to find out who it is for sure. Update soon again!

An excellent job as usual with the latest chapter. And honestly, I think that you portrayed Raito spot on. Er, I mean you did a wonderful job. thank you so much for posting and writing this story, reading it is a pleasure. Please update when convenient.

Haha, keep painting him. :P That really got Light. And your story really got me. Let's see, it's 01:08 in the morning and I feel totally fine, except that now I have to find another story since I just read the latest chapter. I really like your plot, it's one of the better that's not containing the Death Note. Your way of writing L is great and I love the non-Kira Light. Very good^^ He's so fun to tease. :P Can't wait for the next chapter. (By the way, I enjoy the length of the chapters too, not too long or to short. Even though a story is great the chapters can still be too long.)

Excellent job. I love the exquisitely specific details that you put in this chapter about how light's physique is captured in the portrait done by L. Keep up the good work!

<<‘ Sweet Jesus! Is that electrical tape?!’>>

:::falling over giggling:::
Oh this was very well done indeed. I unexpectedly caught myself chuckling several times. I think you have L down perfectly, it is well written and I really enjoy your sense of humor. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Nice story and very good writing style! ^^ (I'm just sad, why I'm a fan of dominating Raito, who always control everything and everyone... But I still hope it can be RxL, and not LxR! ^^)

You have me copmletely captivated by this story. I find myself checking the site every other day to see if there is a new chapter, even though I know they will not be. Please continue your marvilous work.