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Wow, very interesting! ^^ I definitely like where this is going!

Please! More More More!

Really good predicament Raito is in there XD
Loved it!

L is so amazing in this fic.I love him.

in your last chapter.... I can't help feel you have drawn Raito too weak. I can't picture Raito giving into displaying paintings of himself so easily. I can't see Raito being such a wimp. I can't see him not putting up a better, strong, more organized, agressive fight. I can't see Raito as willingly being so careless and neglectfull with himself or anything supposed to represent him. Raito has always struck me as someone who cares for himself, who takes pride in who he is and someone with a sense of worth from his resources; be it his mind, looks or acting ability. That Raito would cave and let someone imply something so... base... so slutty... about him, to a public audience no-less, doesn't sound like Raito to me. Art piece or not I can't believe Raito would hang a nude representing himself, on a wall to be viewed and sold to anyone, art dealer and pervert alike. Plus that Raito do something so stupid business wise doesn't make sense. Raito's place is famous right? So if he hung painting of himself by L then the media and rumor mill would have a field day with him and print all kinds of lewd spins to it. Plus then people could hound him to for meetings with L, thinking 'hey why not just ask L's lover for an intereview with L.'

Sigh. sorry for the mini rant. It's just that it was all going so well. i really like your work but this last part seemed to me like a bad move. Like way too OOC. Anyway I'm just sharing my thoughts. It's your story.

Okay. I am officially IN LOVE with this story!

I nearly fell out of my chair when I read about the nude!

I love that Raito is so thrown off by L, and that he was finally able to provoke a small amount of emotion from L in return.

Thank you, thank you, thank you for updating this! Ahahaha- this chapter was great too. I know I might sound crazy, but I've been checking at least once a day every day since I've read this to see if you've updated it. I was so pleased to see you added another chapter! This chapter lived up to my expectations again. It makes me smile and I can completely see L, Light, Misa, and Matsuda acting exactly as you describe them. I love your line about Light hearing L pout. Such a fresh spin on the idea of an audible pout! Kudos again! I can't wait to read the next chapter~<3

Hahahahaha!
That was hilarious!
I like your fanfiction, it's really refreshing compared with all the other dark, angsty stuff out there. Keep it up! I can't wait to read more of it.
Bye
Haz

I loved this chapter! I was actually listening to music and reading it, but, when I got to the part where Raito sees that the whole collection is about himself, I had to turn my music off and fully concentrate on the chapter. It was highly amusing. ^_^. L is always tripping up Raito one way or another and each time is more fascinating and amusing to read than the next. Lovely work.

I'm glad that the chapter was a bit longer this time. ^_^. Makes me feel all warm inside. =). Oh, and your music video is awesome! I added it to my favorites. It's so well timed and makes sense with the song that it is played with. Anyway, wonderful job, like always.

Update soon!

~Kitsune55

Another fun chapter. One must love L's creative imagination in painting our prudish Raito. You little hint in your author's note has me looking forward to more. Does that mean that our boys switch? Because that will be exciting. I wait patiently for the next installment.

Aw man this chapter is so funny! Poor Raito. Especailly the nude. Hehe I so can't wait to see what happens next. I mean now that he has to sell them- the nude one too *snickers at the thought of that* I mean how is it going to be for him. And then what L said about the painting him in the future.

And your author notes have me really wanting to see what happens there. Hmm I so can't wait to read more!