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February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*laughs* Ok the rate comment had me laughing.
But man your characterization is just so on the mark! I love how L has done all of that to Ratio in just such a short amount of time, makes you wonder what he'd do to him if they were together longer. ^_^
But wow your story is just awesome! I loooove it and can't wait to see where it goes next. Especially since these two are just too fun to read together.
And L is perfect! ^_^
Keep up the great work.
~Ice~
But man your characterization is just so on the mark! I love how L has done all of that to Ratio in just such a short amount of time, makes you wonder what he'd do to him if they were together longer. ^_^
But wow your story is just awesome! I loooove it and can't wait to see where it goes next. Especially since these two are just too fun to read together.
And L is perfect! ^_^
Keep up the great work.
~Ice~
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February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it makes my day to see this fic updated :D geez, talk about forward L! He has no tact whatsoever -___- But I'm glad you keep him in character in that sense here haha! well I'll be looking out for the next update
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February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love where you are going with this.
Can't wait until they actually meet. THat will be interesting.
;]
Can't wait until they actually meet. THat will be interesting.
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February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Candy bracelets! I don't think anyone else in the world has used that kind of candy with L before. I like the image of him sort of gnawing at his writs. I just can't say it enough...I LOVE this story!
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February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your L!
You make all of his [normally abnormal] behaviors seem completely natural, the way they come across in the manga.
Excellent job.
You make all of his [normally abnormal] behaviors seem completely natural, the way they come across in the manga.
Excellent job.
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February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this girl was very impressed with your story so far.
She has to admit, she only read your story because the plot sounded interesting, but she found it to be very well written and quite thoughtful.
If this girl may mae a suggestion? If you rewrite your Summary, you may garner a little more interest. It so much better than your summary makes it sound.
She has to admit, she only read your story because the plot sounded interesting, but she found it to be very well written and quite thoughtful.
If this girl may mae a suggestion? If you rewrite your Summary, you may garner a little more interest. It so much better than your summary makes it sound.
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February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is great.I can't wait to see more.Now this will be interesting, how will Light will react when he sees L.Good job.Pls update soon
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February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awww this is so much fun i LOVE alt. stories!!! i like the idea of L as an artist too what an imagenation!!!
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January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can be that one person! Update for me! I want to know! Really good job on this story. I tend to like the ideas that people come up with for au stories and this is different from what I've seen before. Good job!
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January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for letting us know when we can generally expect to see updates.
I enjoyed your simple but effective method of introducing L and Light and am still very much looking forward to reading more.
I enjoyed your simple but effective method of introducing L and Light and am still very much looking forward to reading more.