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I was right about it being L. ^^ The apple and orange thing make me crack up. I'm dying to read their conversation. Update soon.

Yay very good! L and Raito are making contact again. Near needs to go die if he thinks he can come between those two. I wish the world wasn't so close-minded when it comes to gay couples that's terrible thatpeople are persecuted for loving someone just because they're the same sex. I myself am in one such relationship, and it's hard enough getting others to accept it. But hopefully those two can have their freedome one day. Keep up the good work and see you next chapter.

-L

hmm...
favorite part is obiviously the 'juicing' of apple-raito... I also like that you put his 'signature' outfit in the story so seamlessly.
The only part i didnt like is that it is so much shorter compared to the other chapters... but im not one to judge (considering i start a chapter and never finish it)
overall, a 7/10 for this chapter... and a 9/10 for ther overall story

about #26...

“ Red Apple to Orange, Red Apple to Orange, come in Orange.”
''The…Apple no longer needs to be juiced.''

Where in the WORLD did you get that from??? O_o

Regardless, it was funny! :-) You know if this story was just humor and no angst
that would be ALRIGHT with me, though if you had read over 100 stories that was
angst you would be dying for a little humor, too.

It's moments like these that really love Matsuda and Misa. "The apple doesn't need juiced." ROFL! Oh my gawd! *guffaws* Anyway, L the Drummer, eh? *is impressed* I think, though, if I were L, I'd have Raito have to beg me to take him back. Seems only fair. *sniffs*

Ha ha, made my day with your update, per usual!

Joie,
Gloria

I dont live in NZ....but I know someone who reciently moved there and went to Doujicon... (Bitch moved to NZ >.< *cries*)She goes by the name of Fox. And from what I remeber she dressed up as a rather street looking Axel~

And I just noticed... I think that is a pic of her in your jounalz with the Roxas... XD

Small world~

about #25...

It took me 3-4 days to catch up, but...

Now...

OH my God!!! That poh' child!!! You REALLY love putting him through the
ringer! First, Nate...then Mikami AGAIN??? *sigh* No knight in shing armor this
time. By the way, was the puzzle ring in that jacket, I can't remember.

Also, why do I have the feeling this ''performer'' is...*whispers* L.

my boredom is eating me!
I swear ive re-read this story about 50 times this week...
-_- and that doesnt include my searching for new stories and rereading the others...
so... bored... cant... function...
DX

Ah so Mikami is back and creepier than ever! Scary. And poor little Raito, heartbroken and left to fend for himself. I rather think it was probably good for him to do so. He needed a dose of reality, and a shot of realization that he can take care of himself if necessary. A little courage wouldn't do him any harm either. If he and L are going to ever make it :) Thanks for the updates. Hope the personal arena is okay. You haven't mentioned your hectic life in awhile. Take Care. As always, the update was a wonderful read.

Awww, poor Raito! The fixation on his puzzle ring got to me. And him keeping it in his pocket...! I also liked the bit where he said L couldn't feel any worse seeing it than he had taking it off-- ouch. Nice, though.

Sorry this took me a few days to reply to! But, it is read, and here the reply is. Lol, your fic still makes me want to take Nate to a dark alley and beat some human emotion into him. Which is weird for me, so yay!

Also. I loooved Raito's oppressive atmosphere attempting to cow Matsuda into submission and ruin his mood. That was wonderful. *laughs*

And...! Mikami. Sooo creepy. His fingers were broken and split and he just put a bloody print on the door and babbled on about loving Raito?! That's so great, and so scary. I really like your Mikami, and "walking insane asylum" is a perfect description for him.

Super curious about what will happen next! I think the card said, "Look out! Your stalker is standing right next to you. Love, Urbanflowerwarnings.com" or something. I don't know if that's a real website, it could be. But. Oh no, tension is building! I'm also wondering what L's doing during these months. I'm guessing curled up in depression glumly eating candy.