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so far so good, the first chapter made a good impression, lol i can't wait to meet L!!

Ohh wow how intersting! Light going to L's place. Is he going to see L now or is it going to be a miss. Hehe I can't wait to see the next chapter. This story is so well written and I love the pace of it all- not too fast or too slow. But right at the right pace where it isn't rushed and doesn't bore the readers. And the style! Yay I rejoice to read it. ^_^ Update soon I can't wait to see what happens next!!

Another great chapter ^_^ I really look forward to the next chapter, and I cant wait to see what happens!!!

Yay! I was so happy to see another chapter. And I love how Light is still so much in character. Even as a gallery owner he still seems to have a massive stick up his ass and he over analyzes EVERYTHING. I'm also rather enjoying imagining L as an eccentric artist. You've just seemed to have found the perfect AU for these guys. I am a happy girl!

Very interesting plot line, sweet. I'm very interested in where it will go. I'll be watching for the next update.

Thank you for posting. ^^

It looks very interesting. Is it gonna be LxLight or LightxL? (Please say LxLight... *puppy eyes*)

When I first clicked on the link, I thought to myself, "Hm, I wonder if its a PWP, or if it has actual substance?" And wham, boy did I get an excited shock. Believe, you, me - this story has substance and more. Very tangible characters, the flow of the story is very nice - and Raito's thoughts are pretty funny.

The fact that he puts up with Misa, Matsuda, and other people who most would find foolish, and/or idiotic to indulge with, shows that he is, in fact, a good, kind, and patient person; regardless of his impatience or temper regarding things that are a passion to him, albeit it seems that he strives for a more mild temper, I can't help but feel that although he disparages Misa and Matsuda in his thoughts, its more out of a type of fondness, than anything, even if its sometimes in exasperation. Which is to be expected, as he is no longer a teenager, but a mature adult. I really, really enjoy your Raito. He is not an arserag, nor is he condescending - he has taste, yes, but he doesn't let that overshadow his relations with other people.


I think L's going to have a muse for inspiration, for life, not that I blame him - Raito's looks are astonishingly exquisite. I don't say handsome, ethereal, beautiful or gorgeous, because those words just don't cut it for Raito's looks.

I do have a question: is this going to be L/Raito, or Raito/L? I desperately hope for the former pairing, because I really enjoy seeing Raito dominated by L, its sexy and entirely erotic in pictures. I won't give up on the story if RAITO is the one being dominant, but only because this story is fresh, original, and written very tastefully, unlike a lot, though there are a few gems admittedly, this happens to be one of the few, too! Wonderful job, by the way, if I haven't already typed that.

This is one of the few stories, where I'm thinking, simultaneously, "Where's 'TEH' sexORS?! Now? No!" and, "Oh, thank god, there's no sex, but actual storyline and PLOT!"

Wow great chapter. I can't wait to read more soon. Please keep it coming. What happened to Watari? I can't wait to see what you have planed for L and Light so please keep it coming.
L/Raito all the way

This is turning out to be a very interesting AU Death Note fic! :] I look forward to seeing more chapters!

Even though the chapter was bit short, it seems promising. It is an interesting idea you have going here, I would very much like to see where this is going. Please post more of the story.