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Chs 3-6

LOVED the party description and the house, I really could see it in my mind!

"HIRO!"

Whoa, didn't see that one coming (no pun intended, but funny anyway!) I was like "WTF!?!" ^_~;

Great job! I might end up reading this in one fell swoop after all!

*goes to read chapter 7*

EIRI-CHICK
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Oh wow! At first I was worried when Tohma came in that Ryuichi was in trouble! I was like- ohhh no poor Ryu!

But then when everything came out ok. I was like- ok now Tohma can live a lil longer (I woulda jumped through the screen to keep Ryu safe)!

Anyways cool story, I really really like the story, especially this chapter! Awesome work!

Wow you're updating faster then what I can leave a review after each chapter. It's like saw chapter 11 was up but then had to go to church and when I come back ya got 12 up. But hey I'm not complaining!

Wow I have to say this story is just so awesome. EAch chapter is making me want to read more! And it just leaves me wanting to know what's going to hapen next. I'm so glad K was on Ryuichi's side when he showed up. Now to get back safely. I can't wait to read more!

Oh wow awesome story so far, I looooooooove it. And I just wonder what is going to happen next. Who does Ryuichi have to help him. Hee I can't wait to read more. i'll be waiting!

*flails* Poor Hiro! Oh no what's going to happen to him! *grabs random people* Someone hasta save him. Hopefully Eiri's plan will be done in time. Poor Hiro! Update soon!!