rate_review Reviews

I agree with everything everyone so far has said. This was a wonderful story and totally could happen, the way I would want it to happen too. You are an exceptional writer. I hope you do more for this story, that would be awesome!

No matter that it's a one-shot, this is probably one of the best Saya/Haji stories I've ever read. You carry the overall melancholy of the original story through very precise word choice and scene description, smoothly transitioning between the open end of the series to a reemergence that's entirely believable (I second the appreciation of the 'Madonna' smile imagery. Absolutely stunning). I could feel the tension of love through every part. I rolled around in the romance of it! It was beautiful, passionate and erotic. Standing ovation. Seriously.

^_^ Normaly I'm not one for het, yoai's my thing, but you did this story exceptionally well. Awesome job.

Wonderful work. I thoroughly enjoyed this story and your writing. It's not often I find a story--even a short one--online that is of such high quality.

A beautifully written story. Sorry I have so little words but it's 6:10 a.m. so I've been up for almost 24 hours and my brains almost shot @_@ But anyway enjoyed the read.

I adore this pairing, it is really too hard to find a good one. You did a fantastic job I love this to a hundred million pieces. That Kai would be reasing the twins and the whole queen thing was killing me. I loved your use of vocab and the 'madonna' smile was lovely. You really are such a gifted wordsmith I can't gush about this enough. Oh and the virgin thing was fan freaking tastic. The spacing and pacing was smooth and the blood play was erotic and well done.