rate_review Reviews

Whee I'm binge reading today! Luv your style of writing, is great to see what that mosshead's thinking :) zosan bansai!

As if I could flame my horny fic writing nakama ;) I really like Dom Sanji and Zoro's reaction to him - the dynamic between those two is great. Very naughty. You have to write more!

wat thats the end plz tell me ur joking and if u r thats one cruel friggin joke my friend lol ... but no ur story isn't bad at all u just need to continue it *thumbs up* yep continue ... b/c if others dont wanna read it that doesn't matter b/c i do at least u got one fan right? XD

hahaha! don't feel bad! the rest of the story was more than enough to make up for your ending! much love! i liked the first part, but the second... mmmm. it was as if the first part was a new desert you decided to try and sure, it was super yummy, but then you go back and eat your favorite, and well, there's just nothing like the classic. So yes. What i am saying is: much love. and i have a suggestion on how to remedy the ending! just write another part! ;)

*BOWS DOWN*

oh my god such a great job on the first chapter. YEs...a dominated Zoro who realises and appriciates! This was so awesome.

MOre please.

2xd chapter was okay. Good sex but I wanted more Sanji insight after chapt 1.

ANywho...HOT HOT HOT!

Hot. Really really hot. I want more!

I like this fic. I think ya done good kid. Keep it up. And I don't think that with this sort of fic you really need an 'ending'. Since it's mostly thoughts and smut, not really a plot driven thing ya know?

words fail me. it was just THAT beautiful. no flames for you sorry.

Mmmm. I just started One Piece when I got the urge for some Zoro/Sanji ficcing. What luck have I to stumble across this after wading through... crap. I really enjoyed this little ficlet, only wishing that there was more for me to sink my teeth into.

I especially liked this line: "Sanji was always desperate with his movements, urgent and needing. Zoro knew he craved his body like cigarettes. But what made it even sweeter was that he couldn't chain smoke Zoro. There had to be a break." There's just something about it that went down smooth and sultry, like a rich dark chocolate. It was a great way to associate two things.

Anyways, loved it! Good grammar and all that.

~Dracoqueen22~

well it IS rather random....
I know it's a drabble, but if you expanded maybe I would undertsnad Sanji's feelings better :)
hot smex thou