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June 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like this fic so please carry on its really cool how you made raito innocent and not kira. I reaally like ur way of writing too. thanx for writing wat you hav.
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April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
your story is awesome. and your portraying B really well! ^^ keep up the good work! ;)
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September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hmmm...raito's ability is interesting and kinda original
I enjoy the interaction between the human world and the spiritual world the most; the fact that both men are falling for each other is even more gleeful and gay (no pun intended!)
keep it up
I enjoy the interaction between the human world and the spiritual world the most; the fact that both men are falling for each other is even more gleeful and gay (no pun intended!)
keep it up
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September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is kinda shibby! *realize how lame she sounds*
no kira!light and it has a new plot twist that's kinda fun and cool to read.
I really enjoy the ghost and the vampire :)
keep up the good work
no kira!light and it has a new plot twist that's kinda fun and cool to read.
I really enjoy the ghost and the vampire :)
keep up the good work
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April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Kudos on the concept: The idea is very original, very interesting.
Your writing style could be improved a little, however. You don't seem to really notice grammatical errors, and your writing style itself is confusing and a little rushed.
There is a lot of potential here, she would love to see it develop more in to a fantastic fiction.
Your writing style could be improved a little, however. You don't seem to really notice grammatical errors, and your writing style itself is confusing and a little rushed.
There is a lot of potential here, she would love to see it develop more in to a fantastic fiction.
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April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow interesting chapter. Misa misa comes. I can't wait to see what will happen now that she is here. Please update soon! I can't wait to see more.
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April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
To be honest, I didn't like it at first but it has grown on me. I will continue to read. Very interesting plot, very different from what I have seen so far.
PS. Wh00t for the Wiccan doctor. ^^
PS. Wh00t for the Wiccan doctor. ^^
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April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, update soon. I wonder how you will introduce B...(that is a good book, huge twist at end). Can't wait to read more.
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April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Light you...Light you what!?!?!??!? I hate cliff-hanggers.*smiles*
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March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is an awsome idea. Please continue. =^-^=