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March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awesome chapter.
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March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE how L traps people like that- tell who he is and then go but ya can't kill me! HA! That is just too perfect. A perfect trap huh.
Anyways I love this story and can't wait to read more. Update soon!
Anyways I love this story and can't wait to read more. Update soon!
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March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!! WHY DID YOU STOP THERE!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! THIS STORY IS GREAT I'M GLAD THAT I WENT TO SEE WHAT STORIES WAS WRITTEN FOR DEATH NOTE AND FOUND THIS!!!!!!!!!!*kicking myself for not looking sooner*BUT I LEARNED MY LESSON*smiles* can't wait for chapter 6 till then BYE LOVE
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February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Uh-oh. I sounds like the same love triangle that happened with Light Grandma is going to happen to him. I hope he doesn't get raped, but I'm guessing he does or almost does because you mentioned it in the story. I love this story, can't wait for more.
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February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow it's so good that L caught it when he did or else...Light woulda died early on huh. But it makes me wonder why Light is being targeted right now and what is gonna happen next. Hee update soon I so can't wait to read more!!
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February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hun, it was lovely and I loved it. I can't wait to see more. I have just one thing to reccomend; that you perhaps invest in a beta. Thanks and that's all. Now, I'm off to find more!
Viridian Kat.
PS. Looks like we had similar ideas.
Viridian Kat.
PS. Looks like we had similar ideas.
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February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was liking this story so far... until you got to the parts where Light talked about how rape could unlock the "final level of ablity". =\
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February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohh this is just getting more and more interesting. I mean- heh wow.
If I was able to have the power to make people see spirits just by kissing them. Hell I'd be running around kissing everyone I could find. I mean I would be able to cause mass hysteria just with a simple kiss. That would be too sweet.
But yes I love this story. Update soon!!
If I was able to have the power to make people see spirits just by kissing them. Hell I'd be running around kissing everyone I could find. I mean I would be able to cause mass hysteria just with a simple kiss. That would be too sweet.
But yes I love this story. Update soon!!
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February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is really good! I can't wait to read more.
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February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cool chapter! And I just can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon!! ^_^