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Loved this wants moar! *Drools*

It would be so great if you wrote more about these two, I like this couple a lot. Hot stuff ~_^

I loved it! Do another! No, it wasn't too long at all. Keep going. :3

I've gotten further with the second disk and now I'm dissatisfied with what I already had down for a second chapter for these two. I have smut planned out...but I can't find a way to make more depth without making the story break too far away from the series...and still make it interesting to read.
A Kuhn/Silabus combination is an interesting idea (poor Sealink is easily swayed...). There's no convenient Pi up where he lives, so I will have to finagle a way to get them together...for smut at least. Sex in the game doesn't sit well with me. I'm all about skin! ^-^;; I'll see what I can scratch up between the two. It'll take a bit though, because of work and all that real life goodness. I'll try to have a chapter up by next Monday (Let's hope...)!

Awesome. :D I'll keep an eye out for it!

I don't actually remember where I found out now. XD; I own several official materials for GU, however, so it's probably in one of those...

In any case, I look forward to seeing more of your writing (and wonder if I can humbly beg a Kuhn/Silabus or Tomonari/Yuuichi fic from you? >.>)

Hey, this isn't bad. ;) I like how you mixed responsibility with haste and a little bit of "screw it all, let's just do this" in the latter half. It made it more of a gripping read, though it got a bit confusing when you kept switching between using their first and last names and that kind of detracted from it a bit. Overall, a good story, though. :)

As for your note on not being able to find any details on Reiko or Tomonari - it's actually confirmed that Tomonari's a brunette, with brown eyes. Though, at the point he's at in GU, I wouldn't be surprised if he wanted to change his looks to be less plain... *lol*

I actually got the blonde hair from watching Liminality. The haze made it impossible to see his eye color...not to mention the only other times you saw him, his eyes were closed. Where did you find out about Tomonari's looks? I looked on dothack.wikia for most of my information (I haven't beat the game yet, hence Alkaid still playing the game). I hate sticking to one way to refer to someone...but I'll take your advice and try not to vary it as much as I have been...or find something more creative to stick to. ^-^ Thanks!

Really well done. I actually spotted it I think very shortly after you put it up so I got the chance to review it. Looking forward to more ^w^