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February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it! The ending was kinda...sudden? Like I was reading and then boom! THE END
But I love how you got Wolfram's emotions to tell the story. Really, the poor boy doesn't get the attention he deserves!
Nice work...bravo!
Looking forward to your next one
But I love how you got Wolfram's emotions to tell the story. Really, the poor boy doesn't get the attention he deserves!
Nice work...bravo!
Looking forward to your next one
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February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a very sweet and poignant story. It was really good. :)
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February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This took my breath away! It was a well written emotional ride, I was hooked on every word! Great story, you should be proud! B reading U!
L8r!
L8r!