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by CodyMThomas

schedule December 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think oneshot is better, to make a second chapter it would be diminished the great story pos-manga between D and Leon.

The part, rigth before the kiss, where the COunt explain why he's realistic in this points and dreams not always come true... yeah, we could see it coming, but it held so much poetical touch in it, and such a rythm! Made me remember Shakespeare, oddilly enough.
person crayonbox
schedule May 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You,!!! *pokes you in the nose, hard* Made me cry! :C
I just finished the first mangaseries with tears in my eyes, wondering if Leon will ever find D again and then I find your fic and bawl all over... which means you did a great job, actually. I don't cry fast, but you made the relationship so well, dark and angsty. Loved it.
person Leilia
schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awww... Poor Leon. D is so stupid. But at the same time he is the one I pity the most. To see the one you love die in such a fashion. It must be very very hard.
I for one would LOVE a second chap.
There are not nearly enough LeonD fanfics out there. And I love your style.
person tash1021
schedule August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my goodness oh my goodness oh please please don't stop writing i need to know what happens although leon dead D can bring him back ... right?
person Arien Calen
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I would like to see a second chapter here. ^^
person cassandraD
schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
dang....you cannot leave at that!
person silver
schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love this story so much! it is very intresting and has really captured my attention! Please make another chapter to this story. i am interested to see what ideas you have for this story.
schedule February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
pretty good. Now that's what I call some serious angst.

in a way, I kinda wish that you would write more chapters to this. But, this is good as a one shot too. :)
person C4PyroGirl
schedule February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, I like how this is written. Another chapter would be seriously awesome. ^^
person kinkou
schedule February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*sobs* I loved it! *wipes tears* part of me says leave it ended there... such a heartfelt ending. but the other is screaming'NOOO!!!! THat can not be all there is. Not for the poor Kami!' I honestly, can say I am torn between them.

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