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August 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
As much as I enjoy lemons, I'm finding that I actually prefer the fluff between the characters. It just adds a sense of realism to the whole deal. Holy shit, I'm turning into a romantic, well, that's surprising. Still, good chapter. Keep up the good work.
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August 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This story is great, I look forward to the next chapters. Continue with your excellent quality of work.
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February 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love all of these short stories. I do hope you continue, it is all beautifully written!
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February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! XD This is so cute and behind the scenes! It's very well written and flows nicely! I can't wait for the next chapter! :D
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February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome second chapter.
I will looking forward to the next chapter, but I won't hold my breath.
I will looking forward to the next chapter, but I won't hold my breath.
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February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a really nice chapter! I really enjoyed it! I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter! :P She seems confersed~ I think Luffy needs to clarrify! Haha! XD Thanks for sharing! :D
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February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very, very good so far. You have incredible writing skill! I can't wait to read the next chapter. I loved the part where he asked for a sandwich! XD It was so like Luffy to be serious about a sandwich! Thanks so much for sharing! :D
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February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Here is your first review.
I don't mind some PG fluffyness, it's good for a relationship, and therefor a story, to fluctuate in intensity, after all it's noting but sex the relationship won't be very satisfying and on the revisers side if it stays too PG one or both parties will grow frustrated.
But I got to ask why was this story posted twice?
I don't mind some PG fluffyness, it's good for a relationship, and therefor a story, to fluctuate in intensity, after all it's noting but sex the relationship won't be very satisfying and on the revisers side if it stays too PG one or both parties will grow frustrated.
But I got to ask why was this story posted twice?