rate_review Reviews

JasminKaiba---Thanks very much. I'm glad to have written something for you to enjoy, and I appreciate the praise, especially coming from a fellow author. I won't stop writing anytime soon, even if my updates are a little...well, extremely unpredictable, lol.

Psyence---Presumably they teleport from rooftop to rooftop, probably getting it on on top of each one, before teleporting into Watson's house and feeling very awkward when he catches them dressing.

This is an amazing story, just like Sinners. I've come across Sinners a few months prior, searching for a fic from few years back, and read a few chapter, you know hopping from one to five and back, lacking the time to fully read it. I have wanted to return and read it and leave a few reviews, but as God wanted I had been at the peak of my own inspiration, and having had married just a few weeks before that, you understand that it can slip one's mind. And I forgot about the story, never been one for Pokemon fanfiction. Then I had an car accident a month ago and ended up with both legs injured in a wheel-chair. My husband works day and night and we just got twins, sombody got to tkae care of them and me, unfortunately, too. So my twin sister came and brought Pokemon dvds, 'for the kids' she says, yeah right. And well that episode with Max and the Ralts reminded me of something. Now am an organizational freak and write everything down, anything could be valuable information. And really in one of my notebooks I found a little stick-on with the title Sinners, read and the address. And now I'm well in the middle of Sinners,taking a pause to read the related one-shots and I'm amazed how a male can write such a romantic story. Now I've been writing fanfiction for over two years and my FF.net account has over sixty stories posted, but not even I have achieved such a high romantic level, and my genre is romance, every single of stories is romance. Well all I wanted to say is I bow my head before you, Sinners is amazing and captivating, you're an fantastic author. I wish you the best of luck with the new Sinners arc and I'm off to read some more.
Your faithful fan,
Jasmin Kaiba

Splenge---I can respond with one word: MAGIC! :-D

Vyers---Glad you like it, heh.

Anonymoose---Gardevoir is indeed awesome.

And do not underestimate the power of magic fish. EVER. They'll cut you, man.

I love fluff, and I love writing love. While Sinners is slowly becoming a darker piece as time goes on, I'm free to make things as cutesy and silly as I want in oneshots, heh. Plus some unrealistic pairings may appear in the future (Slash/Gardie/Flannery, anyone?). And yeah, Gardie likes that. It's my experience that a lot of girls do, even if they don't know it yet, heh.

Chapter 21 will probably be out in April. Probably. I'm not declaring a deadline yet, though.

Zerockas---Sometimes it's just easier to ignore plot problems (like bathing suits) in the face of hotness, heh.

Dante Inferna---Even more than the main Sinners story? :-)

My favorite out of all of the Sinners stories.
Looking forward to more.

Excellent as usual, I especially enjoyed the Q&A section at the end, an amusing touch.

-Zerockas

Another nice one. Even though you'd have to read Sinners to know the characters and understand the situation, it was still a good one-shot lemon to read. There aren't many I've read or liked in the Pokemon section of this site, though Imasuky Lomae's "Garderotica" was nice to read. Is it a coincidence it also contained a Gardevoir?

I've only skimmed the other reviews, so the rest of my review may be repeating what others said. But, Gardevoir's swimsuit outfit? Way too risky. I would think humans would wonder why a Pokemon is wearing such a thing. Not exactly ones for stealth, are they?

The rest of the fic was nice, although I think I'm going to turn into a mouse at the cheese. Especially with the whole magic and pink glowy stuff -- made me think of something from a magical girl anime (nothing specific). But hey, if it allows those two to make-o-- er, I mean, to display their love for each other without getting caught, then good for them. :P

Yay, you brought in Slash's fingering her "back there" from the end of Sinners Arc 1! That was kinda hot to read. I'd still like to see how they'd role-reverse (something I thought about in an earlier review in Arc 1), though, in a future chapter or one-shot.

So, any idea when the adventures of A Boy And His Pokegirlfriend continues?

Oh yes, and RoboRed is right -- Underwater sex for the motherfreakin' win.

EDIT: Yeah, I forgot to add a word in there... Could you delete the old version, please?

I believe RoboRed's point with the one-piece swimsuit was that it would be less suspicious/draw less attention.
Maybe it's just me, but I feel that some people would look a little too long at why what's supposed to be "just this guy's Pokemon" is wearing something so revealing (even if the women around are wearing even more revealing stuff.)

It's almost like taking your sister to shop for a Bikini, then hanging around her all day. And there's a big sign on her/you somewhere that says "THIS IS MY SISTER." People would get weird ideas (or, in their case, the right idea - which would be bad.)

...That, and one-piece suits can still be hot, when worn by the right people (Or Pokemon) in the right style.

All that aside, well done as usual.

Love it! Beautifully well written. Looking foward to the next chapter of Sinners.

Sinners Fan---Glad you enjoyed, heh. I'm working on the next chapter of Sinners right now.